Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“more easier”是错误的比较级用法，且句子结构不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，使表达更自然流畅。

Example: No, I don't write much. I prefer to capture important moments in my daily life with photos because they are easier to keep and share. Writing takes more time in comparison.

Suggestion: 回答缺乏连贯性，表达不够自然。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并且丰富细节，说明为什么某些话题让你印象深刻。

Example: I don't usually like writing, except when I have to write compositions for exams. However, some topics, like describing an important gift, impress me because they allow me to share personal experiences. For example, I once described my birthday gift in detail.

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整，且缺少逻辑连接。建议注意时态和句子完整性，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Example: Yes, I believe what I write will change over time. For example, when I was in grade 2, I wrote about future payment methods, predicting that people wouldn't need to carry cash. Now, this prediction has come true with mobile payments.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误，如“prefer to writing”应为“prefer writing”，且表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式，简化句子结构，使表达更准确。

Example: It depends on the situation. For projects or assignments, I prefer typing on a keyboard. However, during exams like the end of semester test, I prefer handwriting because I have been doing it for 12 years.

Suggestion: 回答表达不清晰，逻辑混乱，且有语法错误。建议简化表达，明确观点，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

Example: I don't keep diaries. Instead, I prefer to remember the important moments of the day in my mind because I feel writing cannot fully express my feelings, and diaries might weaken the memories.

Suggestion: 回答中开头使用了不恰当的连接词“And”，且表达略显重复。建议避免句首使用连接词，简化句子结构，使表达更自然。

Example: Most of the time, I record my life by quietly reflecting on it at night. Sometimes, I share important moments with my friends on social media like WeChat by posting photos I have taken.

× these pictures are more easier to preserve and send to others.

✓ these pictures are easier to preserve and send to others.

“more easier”是错误的比较级用法，‘easier’已经是比较级，不能再加‘more’。应直接使用‘easier’。

× I prefer to writing using a keyboard.

✓ I prefer writing using a keyboard.

‘prefer to writing’中‘to’后应接动词原形或动名词，正确表达是‘prefer writing’或‘prefer to write’。此处应去掉‘to’。

× When I was grade 2 there was a conversation asking us to write about the future and I wrote that would be more convenient paying method and people don't need to bring cash.

✓ When I was in grade 2, there was a conversation asking us to write about the future and I wrote that there would be a more convenient paying method and people wouldn't need to bring cash.

缺少介词‘in’表示年级；‘would be more convenient paying method’缺少冠词‘a’且‘paying method’表达不准确，应为‘a more convenient payment method’；‘people don't need’时态不一致，应改为‘people wouldn't need’以保持虚拟语气。

× I have do it for 12 years.

✓ I have done it for 12 years.

‘have do’是错误的助动词和动词搭配，完成时态应使用‘have done’。

× I don't keep Diaries but instead remember all the impressive moments of a day in my mind because I think writing cannot exactly express your feelings and record the things, and Diaries can dilute your weight of memories.

✓ I don't keep diaries but instead remember all the impressive moments of a day in my mind because I think writing cannot exactly express your feelings and record things, and diaries can dilute the weight of your memories.

‘Diaries’不应大写；‘record the things’中‘the’多余，应去掉；‘dilute your weight of memories’表达不自然，应为‘dilute the weight of your memories’。

× And most times I record my life in my mind by reflecting them on quietly at night.

✓ Most times I record my life in my mind by reflecting on it quietly at night.

句首不应以‘And’开头；‘reflecting them on’搭配错误，应为‘reflecting on it’。