Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免机械重复。可以直接说明写作的频率和原因，句子结构更清晰。

Example: Yes, I write quite often because as a student, I have many assignments that require writing.

Suggestion: 表达不够清晰，语法和用词有误。建议简洁表达喜好并说明原因，使用连词使句子更连贯。

Example: I like writing comedies because they help me relax after a busy week at school.

Suggestion: 回答不够连贯，表达含糊。建议用更清晰的句子说明写作内容会随着想法变化而改变。

Example: Yes, my writing often changes because my ideas and thoughts evolve over time, so I revise my work accordingly.

Suggestion: 表达有语法错误，建议简化句子并用连词连接观点，使表达更自然。

Example: I prefer handwriting because I can quickly jot down ideas on paper, while typing on devices like an iPad is less comfortable for me.

Suggestion: 语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议用简单句说明写日记的频率和原因，注意时态和主谓一致。

Example: I don't keep a diary regularly. I only write in it when I feel very happy or angry.

Suggestion: 表达重复且不够清晰。建议简洁说明喜欢用照片记录生活，并解释原因，避免重复。

Example: I like taking photos to record my life because pictures can show real moments more vividly than words.

× Absolutely, because I am a student and I should complete a lot of homework, including writing.

✓ Absolutely, because I am a student and I have to complete a lot of homework, including writing.

这里“should”用法不当，表示义务时更常用“have to”，更符合语境。

× What do you like to write? Why? Student: I prefer to like the comedy because I should stay at school from Monday to Friday and I don't have a very lot of time to relax, and the writing comedy can unwind myself from the stress of daily life.

✓ I prefer comedy because I have to stay at school from Monday to Friday and I don't have much time to relax, and writing comedy can help me unwind from the stress of daily life.

“prefer to like”表达错误，应直接用“prefer”；“a very lot of time”不正确，应该用“much time”；“the writing comedy”结构不对，改为“writing comedy”；“unwind myself”用法不当，改为“help me unwind”。

× Absolutely, because I have different minds and ideas, so just seconds. I will change my mind and change the things, even some characters.

✓ Absolutely, because I have different thoughts and ideas, sometimes I change my mind and change things, even some characters.

“have different minds”表达不自然，改为“have different thoughts”；“so just seconds”语义不清，改为“sometimes”；“change the things”中“the”不必要，改为“change things”。

× I prefer to use handwriting because when I have a great idea I can write it in the paper quickly. But if I write in typing I am not very good at it to use this iPad or some computer.

✓ I prefer to use handwriting because when I have a great idea I can write it on paper quickly. But if I type, I am not very good at using this iPad or some computer.

“write in the paper”应为“write on paper”；“write in typing”表达错误，应为“type”；“not very good at it to use”结构错误，改为“not very good at using”。

× It don't have really clear time because when I was angry or very happy I will write the date and the things in my diary, but if the just very common day I don't write it.

✓ I don't have a really clear time because when I am angry or very happy I write the date and things in my diary, but if it's just a very common day I don't write it.

“It don't have”主谓不一致，应为“I don't have”；“when I was”时态不符，改为“when I am”；“the just very common day”结构错误，改为“it's just a very common day”。

× I prefer to take photos to recount my life because the photos don't like the words and you just see it, but you can't see the picture. But if you take the photo, you can see the picture and you know the real situation from your life. I think it's meaningful.

✓ I prefer to take photos to record my life because photos are different from words; you just see them, but you can't see the picture in words. But if you take photos, you can see the picture and understand the real situation in your life. I think it's meaningful.

“the photos don't like the words”表达错误，应为“photos are different from words”；“you just see it”中“it”指代不明，应为“them”；“take the photo”应为“take photos”保持一致。