Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，且内容不够连贯。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免语法错误，并且直接回答问题。

Example: No, I don't write much because my job as a graphic designer mainly involves creating visual content rather than writing.

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达喜欢写的内容，并说明原因，注意时态和句子结构。

Example: I like to write down interesting things my children or parents say because their words often reflect unique perspectives.

Suggestion: 回答语法错误明显，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确说明写作内容会如何变化，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

Example: Yes, I believe what I write changes depending on the situations and the different things my family members say.

Suggestion: 表达不够自然，句子结构不完整。建议用更流畅的句子表达偏好，并解释原因，避免断句。

Example: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and emotional compared to typing.

Suggestion: 回答内容混乱且语法错误多。建议直接回答是否经常写日记，并说明原因，句子要简洁明了。

Example: I used to keep a diary when I was in secondary school, but I haven't written one since then.

Suggestion: 回答较为自然，但表达可以更流畅，细节可以更具体。建议使用连接词丰富句子结构。

Example: I usually use my iPhone to record my life through photos and videos because they capture moments more vividly.

× Well, to be honest, I don't write a lot because I'm a graphic designer, so normally I decide graphics a lot.

✓ Well, to be honest, I don't write a lot because I'm a graphic designer, so normally I design graphics a lot.

这里的动词应该是'design'，而不是'decide'，因为表达的是设计图形的意思。'decide'是'决定'，与上下文不符。

× Well, I'd like to write some sentences that was spoken by my children or my grand my parents, because I think what they speak is a quite interesting.

✓ Well, I'd like to write some sentences that were spoken by my children or my grandparents, because I think what they say is quite interesting.

'sentences'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'were'。'grand my parents'应为'grandparents'。'what they speak'应改为'what they say'，更符合表达习惯。

× because I think what they speak is a quite interesting.

✓ because I think what they say is quite interesting.

'a quite interesting'中'a'与'quite'搭配不当，'quite'是副词修饰形容词，前面不需要冠词'a'。

× I think the writing will depending on different situations of different words that my kids or my parents says, yeah, everything will change.

✓ I think the writing will depend on different situations and different words that my kids or my parents say, yeah, everything will change.

'will'后应接动词原形，不能用动名词'depending'。'my kids or my parents says'中主语为复数，谓语动词应为'say'。

× I think the writing will depending on different situations of different words that my kids or my parents says, yeah, everything will change.

✓ I think the writing will depend on different situations and different words that my kids or my parents say, yeah, everything will change.

'different situations of different words'表达不清，应改为'and different words'，使句子更通顺。

× I would prefer handwriting because I think the handwriting is more emotional than the typing and also I think it is fulfilled. The human feelings.

✓ I would prefer handwriting because I think handwriting is more emotional than typing, and also I think it conveys human feelings.

'fulfilled the human feelings'表达不当，应改为'conveys human feelings'，更符合英语表达习惯。

× Well, to be honest, I remember when I was in secondary school at that time, I kept diary back from that time. I never write the diary.

✓ Well, to be honest, I remember when I was in secondary school, at that time, I kept a diary. Since then, I have never written a diary.

'kept diary'缺少冠词'a'。'I never write the diary'时态不对，应使用现在完成时'have never written'。

× Well, to be honest, I remember when I was in secondary school at that time, I kept diary back from that time.

✓ Well, to be honest, I remember when I was in secondary school, at that time, I kept a diary.

'kept diary'缺少冠词'a'，应为'kept a diary'。

× Well normally I will use the iPhone to record my life such as the image or videos.

✓ Well, normally I use my iPhone to record my life, such as images or videos.

'the iPhone'应为'my iPhone'，表示个人所有。'the image or videos'应为'images or videos'，且复数形式更合适。