Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cavabınızda çoxlu "uh" və "umm" kimi sözlər var, bu, təbii danışığı azaldır. Daha qısa və aydın cümlələr qurmağa çalışın və lazımsız təkrarlardan çəkinin.

Example: Yes, I enjoy writing a lot, especially diaries, because I like planning my day and reflecting on what happened.

Suggestion: Cümlələrinizdə mövzunu birbaşa ifadə edin və əlavə məlumatları əlaqələndirici sözlərlə birləşdirin. Məsələn, "because" və ya "so" kimi sözlərdən istifadə edin.

Example: I like writing because it helps me plan my day effectively, so I can complete all my tasks on time.

Suggestion: Cavabınızı daha aydın və qısa edin, "uh" və "actually" kimi sözləri azaltmağa çalışın. Mövzunu birbaşa ifadə edin və səbəbləri dəqiq göstərin.

Example: I think my writing will change in the future because I plan to study abroad, so my experiences and daily life will be different.

Suggestion: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlardan və "umm", "uh" kimi sözlərdən qaçının. Niyə əl yazısını üstün tutduğunuzu daha aydın və qısa ifadə edin.

Example: I prefer handwriting because it's easier for me than typing, as I sometimes struggle to find the right keys on the keyboard.

Suggestion: Cümlələrinizi tamamlayın və daha aydın ifadə edin. "Actually" və "umm" kimi sözləri azaltmağa çalışın və fikirlərinizi tam şəkildə ifadə edin.

Example: I write in my diary every day, mostly to plan my day, but I only write about other things when something special happens.

Suggestion: Cavabınızı daha strukturlaşdırılmış və aydın edin. "Uh" kimi sözləri azaltın və mövzunu birbaşa ifadə edin.

Example: I don't use other methods now, but when I was a child, I used to record myself talking about my day and future plans on my parents' phone.

× Yes, I love uh, writing a lot, especially Diaries because I love planning my day and at the end of the day I also, umm, like to write uh, what has happened in my uh, day.

✓ Yes, I love writing a lot, especially diaries because I love planning my day and at the end of the day I also like to write what has happened in my day.

The word 'Diaries' should not be capitalized as it is a common noun. Also, the use of filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' should be avoided for clarity. The verb forms 'writing' and 'planning' are correctly used as gerunds here, so no change is needed for the verb form itself.

× I can't even complete my tasks because I need to write them, write down them beforehand.

✓ I can't even complete my tasks because I need to write them down beforehand.

The phrase 'write down them' is incorrect because the pronoun 'them' should come after the phrasal verb 'write down'. The correct order is 'write them down'.

× Like what should I do in that day?

✓ Like what should I do that day?

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary before 'that day'. The correct phrase is 'that day' without 'in'.

× That's why I love writing.

✓ That's why I love writing.

This sentence is correct and does not contain any grammar mistakes.

× Uh, actually I don't have any idea, but for the future, for the near future, it can change because I'm planning to move abroad for my university.

✓ Uh, actually I don't have any idea, but in the future, in the near future, it can change because I'm planning to move abroad for my university.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used with 'the future'. The correct preposition is 'in' when referring to time periods like 'in the future'.

× Uh, there my life will be different, and that's why my writing is also a little bit different.

✓ There, my life will be different, and that's why my writing will also be a little bit different.

The sentence lacks a comma after 'There' for clarity. Also, to maintain tense consistency, 'is' should be changed to 'will be' because it refers to a future situation.

× I definitely prefer handwriting because it's much easier than, umm, typing on computer because, umm, it's quite challenging for me to find, uh, the letters place.

✓ I definitely prefer handwriting because it's much easier than typing on the computer because it's quite challenging for me to find the letters' place.

The phrase 'typing on computer' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'computer'. Also, 'letters place' should be possessive as 'letters' place' to indicate the place of the letters.

× And actually I write Diaries every day, but it depends what I write.

✓ And actually I write diaries every day, but it depends on what I write.

'Diaries' should not be capitalized. Also, the phrase 'depends what I write' is missing the preposition 'on' after 'depends'.

× But about other things I don't write every day because when something happens really different at that time, I.

✓ But about other things, I don't write every day because I only write when something really different happens at that time.

The original sentence is incomplete and has incorrect word order. The corrected sentence completes the thought and places words in the correct order for clarity.

× I just, when I was a kid, I was recording myself, uh, on my parents phone or on computer.

✓ I just, when I was a kid, was recording myself on my parents' phone or on the computer.

The possessive form 'parents' phone' needs an apostrophe to become 'parents' phone'. Also, 'on computer' should be 'on the computer' with the definite article.