Writing— Part 1 Report

× I always read a lot when I was a high school student.

✓ I always read a lot when I was a high school student.

此句中“read”发音为过去式，符合过去时态，无需修改。

× but now I just write some important things on my textbooks.

✓ but now I just write some important things in my textbooks.

介词“on”用法不当，应该用“in”表示在书本内部写东西。

× Actually, I like writing some novels because I think it's a good way to entertainment plus it can help me to relieve the stress of the routine life.

✓ Actually, I like writing some novels because I think it's a good way to entertain plus it can help me relieve the stress of routine life.

“way to entertainment”中“entertainment”应为动词不定式“to entertain”，且“help me to relieve”中“to”可省略，且“the routine life”中“the”不必要。

× Yes, I sing. The sing a ride would be change because with my experience and my skill in writing would be developed in my age, I can write more creative and more experience.

✓ Yes, I think the style and writing would change because as I gain experience and improve my writing skills with age, I can write more creatively and with more experience.

句子结构混乱，单词拼写错误（sing应为think），表达不清晰，需重组句子并更正词汇。

× Well, I was a high school student, I not have a phone or laptop so I just can write it down.

✓ Well, when I was a high school student, I did not have a phone or laptop so I could only write it down.

“I not have”应为过去时否定形式“did not have”，“just can write”应为过去时“could only write”。

× But now the phone and laptop play a crucial role in my daily life, so I prefer typing because it's so convenient and easy to type in.

✓ But now the phone and laptop play a crucial role in my daily life, so I prefer typing because it's so convenient and easy to use.

“easy to type in”表达不自然，改为“easy to use”更符合习惯用法。

× Actually I never had these hobbies so I never do it, but I prefer take photo and videos when I suffer some important moment.

✓ Actually, I have never had these hobbies so I never do it, but I prefer taking photos and videos when I experience some important moments.

“never had”应为现在完成时“have never had”，“prefer take”应为“prefer taking”，“suffer some important moment”用词不当，应为“experience some important moments”。

× I prefer to take a photo and a video, then upload it to the social media platform like WeChat Moment to show me off to record it, and I think it's a good way to convey my emotion and have a contact with my friends.

✓ I prefer to take photos and videos, then upload them to social media platforms like WeChat Moments to show off and record them, and I think it's a good way to convey my emotions and keep in contact with my friends.

“show me off”错误，应为“show off”，“a photo and a video”应为复数形式，“social media platform”应为复数，“have a contact”应为“keep in contact”，“emotion”应为复数“emotions”。