Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more clear and concise. Avoid repeating words and focus on giving a direct response with supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I write a lot, especially when I have free time. For example, I often write articles or compose music inspired by what I read or see.

Suggestion: Make your answer complete and avoid unfinished sentences. Use clear linking words to explain why you like writing these types of texts. Provide specific reasons to support your answer.

Example: I like to write articles, fiction, and non-fiction stories because after reading or watching them, I enjoy expressing the ideas in my own words and exploring different perspectives.

Suggestion: Try to complete your sentences and organize your ideas logically. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly and avoid repetition.

Example: I think my writing will change over time because as I gain more experience and think more deeply, my perspectives and skills will improve.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to compare your preferences and explain reasons for each.

Example: It depends on the situation. I prefer handwriting when I compose lyrics or stories because it feels more personal, but I use typing on a laptop for faster writing and editing.

Suggestion: Avoid incomplete sentences and repetition. Use linking words to explain the benefits of keeping a diary and how it affects you emotionally.

Example: I write in my diary once a week. This helps me organize my thoughts and memories. Sometimes, I read old entries, which makes me feel nostalgic and happy.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words to explain how these methods help you remember your life moments.

Example: Besides writing diaries, I use my phone to take pictures and make short video clips. I often post them on social media, which helps me revisit and remember my past experiences.

× Yes, I do write a lot most of the time when I am free and and I when I see something like articles when I read it and compose of music and anything that that makes me to write more and about it. And.

✓ Yes, I do write a lot most of the time when I am free and when I see something like articles, when I read them and compose music or anything that makes me write more about it.

The original sentence has redundant words and incorrect verb forms such as 'compose of music' which should be 'compose music'. Also, 'makes me to write' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me write'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper verb usage.

× I do like to write the more about the articles and the fiction stories and non fiction story as well. When I read them I read them and watch them. Then I change it into my words and keep writing about this all. So I like to.

✓ I like to write more about articles, fiction stories, and non-fiction stories as well. When I read or watch them, I then put them into my own words and keep writing about all of this. So I like to.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and articles, such as 'the more about the articles' and 'non fiction story' instead of 'non-fiction stories'. Also, 'change it into my words' is better expressed as 'put them into my own words'. The correction improves pronoun and article usage for clarity.

× I believe that everyone have her own perspective for the writing skills and and opinions and so it's maybe change but and some people minds and but for me it's can be a change as well because the more I think things and the more.

✓ I believe that everyone has their own perspective on writing skills and opinions, so it may change. Some people may change their minds, and for me, it can change as well because the more I think about things, the more...

The original sentence has subject-verb agreement errors such as 'everyone have' instead of 'everyone has'. Also, pronoun usage like 'her own perspective' is better as 'their own perspective' for inclusivity. The sentence is corrected for subject-verb agreement and pronoun consistency.

× Well, it's a dependent sometime I prefer the handwriting when I write to expand more the lyrics or compose and the stories in my own words, but as well typing on the laptop and electronic machine.

✓ Well, it depends sometimes. I prefer handwriting when I write to expand the lyrics or compose stories in my own words, but I also use typing on the laptop and electronic devices.

The phrase 'it's a dependent sometime' is incorrect; it should be 'it depends sometimes'. Also, 'compose and the stories' is incorrect; it should be 'compose stories'. 'Electronic machine' is better expressed as 'electronic devices'. The correction fixes preposition and word choice errors.

× I don't write and diary every single day but I do it every week so once a week. So it's healthy to organize my thoughts and memories too. But sometimes I I go back and read the old stories and memories which I have saved with myself and it's make me feel.

✓ I don't write in a diary every single day, but I do it once a week. It's healthy to organize my thoughts and memories. Sometimes, I go back and read the old stories and memories I have saved, and it makes me feel...

The original sentence misuses quantifiers and articles such as 'and diary' instead of 'in a diary'. Also, 'it's make me feel' should be 'it makes me feel'. The correction addresses quantifier and article usage for grammatical accuracy.

× Instead of writing in the Diaries, I also use my phone to take a pictures and make a short videos clips and post them on social media and Instagram. This way I feel to see them and to go and in my past life.

✓ Instead of writing in diaries, I also use my phone to take pictures and make short video clips, then post them on social media and Instagram. This way, I can see them and revisit my past life.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'a pictures' and 'a short videos clips' which should be 'pictures' and 'short video clips'. Also, 'feel to see them and to go and in my past life' is unclear and corrected to 'can see them and revisit my past life'. Preposition and article usage are corrected for clarity.