Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Ответ звучит немного неестественно из-за повторения и нечеткой структуры. Следует избегать повторов и строить ответ более связно, используя связующие слова.

Example: Yes, I write quite a lot every day. For instance, I send messages to my friends and family, and I also practice writing essays to prepare for my exams, which helps me improve my skills.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Рекомендуется использовать правильные времена и более точные формулировки, а также связующие слова для логичности.

Example: I enjoy writing essays because it helps me improve my vocabulary and express my ideas clearly. Moreover, it broadens my horizons by allowing me to explore different topics.

Suggestion: Ответ неструктурирован и содержит много пауз и повторов. Следует строить предложения более грамотно и логично, избегая лишних слов и повторений.

Example: Yes, I believe the things I write will change as I gain more knowledge at university. This helps me connect with different people and expand my worldview, which will improve the quality of my writing.

Suggestion: Ответ достаточно понятен, но содержит небольшие ошибки в грамматике и структуре. Рекомендуется использовать более точные выражения и связующие слова.

Example: I prefer typing because it allows me to write anytime and anywhere, which suits my busy schedule. Also, it's an efficient way to communicate with others.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит много пауз и повторов, что снижает его естественность. Следует говорить более уверенно и использовать связные предложения.

Example: I don't keep a diary because I find it time-consuming. Instead, I prefer other methods to record my daily life.

Suggestion: Ответ понятен, но содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки. Рекомендуется использовать правильные времена и более точные выражения.

Example: I use apps like Telegram to record my life. I save photos and voice messages there, so I can easily look back at them anytime, which is a quick and convenient method.

× I like write essays to prepare for my exams.

✓ I like writing essays to prepare for my exams.

The verb 'like' is followed by a gerund (-ing form) when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Therefore, 'write' should be corrected to 'writing'.

× I when I write it says I improve my vocabulary, I can speak in different in various questions and it broaden my horizons.

✓ When I write, it helps me improve my vocabulary, I can speak on various topics and it broadens my horizons.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'it says' is incorrect and should be 'it helps me'; 'in different in various questions' is awkward and should be 'on various topics'; 'broaden' should be 'broadens' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× I studied university and I learned various, uh, new knowledge which help me to connect with different people, different people.

✓ I studied at university and I learned various new knowledge which helps me to connect with different people.

The phrase 'studied university' is incorrect; it should be 'studied at university'. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'knowledge'.

× And I think that in the future, my world view is change and I can, and it's improve my quality of.

✓ And I think that in the future, my worldview will change and it will improve my quality of life.

The phrase 'is change' is incorrect; future tense requires 'will change'. Also, 'it's improve' should be 'it will improve'. The phrase 'quality of' is incomplete and should be 'quality of life'.

× As for me, indeed I prefer typing when I writing.

✓ As for me, indeed I prefer typing when I am writing.

After 'when', a verb in the present continuous form is needed: 'I am writing' instead of 'I writing'.

× I don't want to take, uh, to grab a lot of time for do this and I think it is, uh, not for me.

✓ I don't want to take up a lot of time to do this and I think it is not for me.

The phrase 'take, uh, to grab a lot of time for do this' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'take up a lot of time to do this'.

× I think the best methods for me to use my record life is use apps.

✓ I think the best method for me to record my life is to use apps.

The phrase 'methods for me to use my record life' is incorrect. It should be 'method for me to record my life'. Also, 'is use apps' should be 'is to use apps'.

× I have a telegram where I have many photos, voice messages which I can look and see in anytime and it's a very fast method to record your life.

✓ I have Telegram where I have many photos and voice messages which I can look at anytime, and it's a very fast method to record your life.

'Telegram' is a proper noun and should not have 'a'. Also, 'look and see in anytime' is incorrect; it should be 'look at anytime'.