Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ, thay vì nói "I feel right is very tired", bạn có thể nói "I find writing very tiring". Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến cách sử dụng từ và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: No, I don't write much. I usually prefer speaking or typing on the computer because writing makes my fingers tired and sore.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với cấu trúc câu đúng và rõ ràng. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "I don't like write" mà nên nói "I don't like to write". Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp lý do cụ thể hơn để câu trả lời thêm thuyết phục.

Example: I don't like writing much, but if I have to choose, I like writing about physics because it is my favorite subject at school.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng thì và cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn, ví dụ "wouldn't change" nên là "won't change". Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "it is certainly not change" mà nên là "they certainly don't change".

Example: No, I don't think what I write will change because I usually write physics concepts or formulas, and they don't change.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp số nhiều và số ít, ví dụ "handwriting make me hurt" nên là "handwriting makes my fingers hurt". Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because handwriting makes my fingers hurt. Typing on the computer is more comfortable for me.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng phù hợp. Ví dụ, "I don't have a habit to keep diary" nên là "I don't have the habit of keeping a diary". Ngoài ra, hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và nói rõ hơn về lý do không giữ nhật ký.

Example: I never keep a diary because I don't have the habit of writing one. Maybe it's because my life doesn't have many special events.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "Take a photo in my phone is more comfortable" nên là "Taking photos on my phone is more comfortable". Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ vựng chính xác và câu mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I don't write a diary. Instead, I take photos with my phone because it's more comfortable and convenient to record my life.

× Instead I usually speak or typing in computer because I feel right is very tired.

✓ Instead I usually speak or type on the computer because I feel writing is very tiring.

The verb 'typing' should be in base form 'type' after 'or' to parallel 'speak'. Also, 'in computer' should be 'on the computer'. 'Right' is a typo for 'writing'. 'Writing' is a gerund here and 'tired' should be 'tiring' to describe the activity causing fatigue.

× Instead I usually speak or typing in computer because I feel right is very tired.

✓ Instead I usually speak or type on the computer because I feel writing is very tiring.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'computer'; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to using a computer.

× I usually hurt my finger, so I don't like right.

✓ I usually hurt my finger, so I don't like writing.

'Right' is a typo and should be 'writing' to correctly refer to the activity causing discomfort.

× I don't like write anything, but if I compulsory choose one, I like write a physics because it is a favorite subject I like in school and yes.

✓ I don't like to write anything, but if I have to choose one, I like to write about physics because it is my favorite subject in school.

The verb 'write' should be in infinitive form 'to write' after 'like'. 'Compulsory' is an adjective; the correct phrase is 'have to choose'. 'Write a physics' is incorrect; it should be 'write about physics'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× if I compulsory choose one, I like write a physics because it is a favorite subject I like in school and yes.

✓ if I have to choose one, I like to write about physics because it is my favorite subject in school.

'Compulsory' is incorrectly used; the modal phrase 'have to' expresses obligation correctly.

× No, I think the things I write wouldn't change because I usually write a concept or formula of physics and it is certainly not change.

✓ No, I think the things I write wouldn't change because I usually write concepts or formulas of physics and they certainly do not change.

'Wouldn't' is correct for hypothetical future. 'Concept' and 'formula' should be plural to match 'things'. 'It is certainly not change' is incorrect; correct form is 'they certainly do not change'.

× I usually write a concept or formula of physics and it is certainly not change.

✓ I usually write concepts or formulas of physics and they certainly do not change.

'Concept' and 'formula' should be plural to agree with 'things'. 'It' should be 'they' to refer to plural subjects.

× Typing in typing is comfortable for me when I type in the computer.

✓ Typing is comfortable for me when I type on the computer.

The phrase 'Typing in typing' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'in the computer' should be 'on the computer'.

× I never keep Diaries because I don't have a habit to keep diary or light.

✓ I never keep diaries because I don't have a habit of keeping a diary or writing.

'Diaries' should be lowercase unless a proper noun. 'Have a habit to keep' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'have a habit of keeping'. 'Diary or light' is unclear; likely 'writing' is intended.

× Maybe because I my life is not have especially events.

✓ Maybe because my life does not have any special events.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'I my life is not have especially events' is ungrammatical. Correct form is 'my life does not have any special events'.

× I don't write dairy, instead I take a photo in my phone.

✓ I don't write a diary; instead, I take photos with my phone.

'Dairy' is a typo for 'diary'. 'Take a photo in my phone' is incorrect; correct preposition is 'with my phone'. Also, plural 'photos' is more natural.

× Take a photo in my phone is more comfortable and convenient to record my life and it is easy to serve.

✓ Taking photos with my phone is more comfortable and convenient to record my life, and it is easy to save.

'Take a photo in my phone' should be 'Taking photos with my phone'. 'Easy to serve' is incorrect; likely intended 'easy to save'.