Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'keep a journey' nên là 'keep a journal'). Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

Example: Yes, I write a lot because it is an essential part of my studies. Additionally, I enjoy composing short stories and keeping a daily journal as it helps me relax.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý đến việc sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và ngữ pháp đúng (ví dụ: 'breeding the journal' nên là 'keeping a journal'). Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ liên kết mạch lạc.

Example: I really enjoy keeping a journal because it allows me to express my thoughts and record personal experiences. Moreover, writing helps me feel better emotionally.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng thì đúng (ví dụ: 'I grow up' nên là 'I grow up' hoặc 'I am growing up'). Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và có liên kết logic giữa các ý.

Example: Yes, I believe the things I write will change as I grow older and gain different experiences, especially regarding my career in the future. However, at the moment, I don't focus much on that.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm và từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: 'along Texas' có thể là lỗi nghe nhầm, 'riding' nên là 'writing'). Câu trả lời nên sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý tốt hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

Example: It depends on the situation. I prefer typing because it is faster and more efficient, especially when writing long texts. However, I choose handwriting when I want to remember information better.

× Additionally, I love composing the short stories or keep a journey every day because it makes me feel relaxed.

✓ Additionally, I love composing short stories or keeping a journal every day because it makes me feel relaxed.

The verbs following 'love' should be in the gerund form (-ing). 'Keep' should be 'keeping' to maintain parallel structure with 'composing'. Also, 'a journey' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a journal' for writing daily entries.

× All for me, I really love breeding the journal because I can express my thoughts and and keep those personal experience.

✓ For me, I really love keeping a journal because I can express my thoughts and keep those personal experiences.

The verb 'breeding' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'keeping' when referring to maintaining a journal. Also, 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match the context. 'And and' is a typo and should be 'and'.

× Additionally, it is also makes me feel better and.

✓ Additionally, it also makes me feel better.

The phrase 'it is also makes' is incorrect; 'is' should be removed to correct the verb phrase. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and', which should be removed for completeness.

× Oh, I think yes, of course, because I I grow up and the experience become different, especially like a career or something in the future.

✓ Oh, I think yes, of course, because I am growing up and the experiences become different, especially regarding a career or something in the future.

The phrase 'I grow up' should be in present continuous 'I am growing up' to indicate ongoing action. 'Experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match the context. 'Like a career' is better expressed as 'regarding a career' for clarity.

× Oh, for me it depends on many situations. I prefer typing because it's faster and more efficient, especially in along Texas.

✓ Oh, for me it depends on many situations. I prefer typing because it's faster and more efficient, especially in long texts.

The phrase 'in along Texas' is incorrect. It should be 'in long texts' to refer to lengthy written material. 'Texas' is a place name and does not fit the context.

× However, I choose riding by hand because it makes me remember information better.

✓ However, I choose writing by hand because it helps me remember information better.

The verb 'riding' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'writing' when referring to handwriting. Also, 'makes me remember' is better expressed as 'helps me remember' for natural English usage.