Writing— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you write a lot?
Candidate
To be honest, I don't write a lot. I only practice writing before exams that require easy writing to improve my skills and prepare well.
Examiner
What do you like to write? Why?
Candidate
Why I would like to write a diary because it can help me recall funding and memorable moments from my daily life. And many years later when I read them, I can easily record those special experiences.
Examiner
Do you think the things you write would change?
Candidate
Yes, absolutely. As I grow older, my experience, perspectives, knowledge will expand and this trends will influence what I choose to write about and how I express myself.
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Candidate
While writing, I prefer typing because I think it is more convenient and flexible. Typing allows me to edit easily, organize content quickly, and share what I've written instantly.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 你的回答比较直接，但缺少流畅自然的表达和具体细节。建议你在回答时使用更自然的表达方式，并且补充一些具体的例子或原因，使回答更丰富。
Example: Actually, I don't write very often. Usually, I only practice writing when I have exams coming up, so I can improve my skills and be well prepared.
What do you like to write? Why?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当（如“funding”应为“fun”），且句子结构不够自然。建议注意语法准确性，使用连词使句子更连贯，并提供更具体的细节。
Example: I like to write a diary because it helps me remember fun and memorable moments from my daily life. Many years later, when I read it, I can easily recall those special experiences.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答内容较好，但有语法错误（如“this trends”应为“these trends”），且可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。建议注意单复数一致，适当使用连接词。
Example: Yes, absolutely. As I grow older, my experiences, perspectives, and knowledge will expand, and these trends will influence what I choose to write about and how I express myself.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Score: 85.0Suggestion: 你的回答清晰且内容具体，但可以通过增加连接词使句子更连贯自然。建议在句子间使用连接词如“because”、“so”等，提升表达流畅度。
Example: I prefer typing when I write because it is more convenient and flexible. For example, typing allows me to edit easily, organize content quickly, and share what I've written instantly.
Grammar
× Why I would like to write a diary because it can help me recall funding and memorable moments from my daily life.
✓ I would like to write a diary because it can help me recall fun and memorable moments from my daily life.
The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure; 'Why I would like to write a diary because' is not a proper clause. It should be rephrased to 'I would like to write a diary because' to form a correct and clear sentence. Also, 'funding' seems to be a typo and should be 'fun'.
× my experience, perspectives, knowledge will expand and this trends will influence what I choose to write about and how I express myself.
✓ my experience, perspectives, and knowledge will expand and these trends will influence what I choose to write about and how I express myself.
The phrase 'this trends' is incorrect because 'trends' is plural and should be preceded by 'these' instead of 'this'. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' in the list for clarity.
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