Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“the ability to writing”应为“the ability to write”，且表达重复。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，提升语言流畅度。

Example: I don't write a lot because my major is mathematics, which focuses more on numbers and formulas. Therefore, I rarely write articles and don't consider myself good at writing.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“it's more professionally”应为“it's more professional”，“it's very suit for my major”应为“it suits my major well”。建议注意词性和搭配，表达更准确。

Example: I prefer writing academic essays rather than personal articles or diaries because they are more professional and relevant to my major. I need to be careful with details, and I enjoy this type of writing.

Suggestion: 回答表达较为清晰，但句子结构稍显混乱，且“personal Diaries”中的“Diaries”不应大写。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，注意大小写规范。

Example: Yes, after I graduate, I probably won't write academic essays anymore. Instead, I will start keeping personal diaries to record my daily life because it's more relaxing and less stressful.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法和表达不自然的问题，如“very not so convenient”应为“not very convenient”，“more good”应为“better”。建议简化表达，使用正确的比较级和形容词。

Example: I definitely prefer handwriting because typing on a keyboard is not very convenient for me. Handwriting allows me to express my thoughts more clearly and professionally.

× Actually I do not write a lot because my major is mathematics, it's about physical and math, so I do not have the ability to writing a lot of articles and I'm not very good at it, so I did not write a lot.

✓ Actually I do not write a lot because my major is mathematics, it's about physics and math, so I do not have the ability to write a lot of articles and I'm not very good at it, so I did not write a lot.

动词后面接动名词（-ing形式）时，通常是特定结构，这里应使用动词原形write，因为前面有情态动词have the ability to，后面应接动词原形。

× Actually I do not write a lot because my major is mathematics, it's about physical and math, so I do not have the ability to writing a lot of articles and I'm not very good at it, so I did not write a lot.

✓ Actually I do not write a lot because my major is mathematics, it's about physics and math, so I do not have the ability to write a lot of articles and I'm not very good at it, so I did not write a lot.

'physical' 应改为 'physics'，因为这里指的是学科名称，使用正确的介词搭配和词汇更准确。

× Maybe I'd like to write some essays more instead of writing some personal articles or genre or Diaries.

✓ Maybe I'd like to write more essays instead of writing some personal articles, genres, or diaries.

'essays more' 词序错误，应为 'more essays'；'genre' 应复数 'genres'；'Diaries' 不应大写。

× I prefer some academic essays. It's more professionally and it's very suit for my major.

✓ I prefer some academic essays. They are more professional and very suitable for my major.

'more professionally' 是副词，需改为形容词 'more professional'；'suit' 应为形容词 'suitable'。

× I should be very careful about it and I'm very good at it.

✓ I should be very careful about them and I'm very good at them.

前文提到的是复数 'essays'，代词应使用复数形式 'them'。

× Yes, of course, if I graduate, I will not write any essays anymore, I think, so I will shift to some personal Diaries someday to record my daily lives.

✓ Yes, of course, after I graduate, I will not write any essays anymore, I think, so I will shift to some personal diaries someday to record my daily life.

'if I graduate' 应改为 'after I graduate' 更符合语境；'Diaries' 不应大写；'daily lives' 应为单数 'daily life'。

× It's just more relaxed and do not have to be more cautious and careful with so much pressure.

✓ It's just more relaxing and I do not have to be so cautious and careful with so much pressure.

'more relaxed' 应为形容词 'relaxing' 来描述感觉；缺少主语 'I'；'more cautious' 改为 'so cautious' 更自然。

× Well, absolutely handwriting, because typing just on the keyboard and the computer is very not so convenient.

✓ Well, absolutely handwriting, because typing on the keyboard and the computer is not very convenient.

'just on the keyboard' 中 'just' 位置不当，应去掉；'very not so convenient' 语序错误，应为 'not very convenient'。

× I think just handwriting can show my logical and my writing skills more professionally and more good I think.

✓ I think handwriting can better show my logic and my writing skills more professionally and better, I think.

'more good' 是错误用法，应为 'better'；'logical' 应改为名词 'logic'；'just' 可省略。