Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误和重复表达。例如，“I studied economics which need a large quantity of calculation”应改为“which requires a lot of calculations”。同时，回答可以更简洁，避免冗长。

Example: Yes, I write a lot because I need to complete my homework and take notes, especially in my economics classes which require many calculations.

Suggestion: 回答时应注意语法和表达的准确性，如“this kind of things”应为“these kinds of things”。此外，使用连接词使句子更连贯，如“so”后面应接完整句子。

Example: I like to write down happy or important moments because I often forget them. I keep these notes on my desk as reminders, and when I feel upset, looking at them gives me courage and comfort.

Suggestion: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如“I I never change it”应为“I never change it”。建议使用更自然的表达，并注意句子结构的完整性。

Example: No, I don't change what I write because they are records of past events. I keep the original feelings, so whenever I recall those moments, I feel the same emotions.

Suggestion: 回答未完成且表达不够连贯。建议完整回答问题，避免句子断裂，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Example: I prefer typing because it allows me to write anytime and anywhere without needing paper or pen, which is very convenient. Also, it's easy to correct small mistakes when typing.

× I studied economics which need a large quantity of calculation, so I usually write when I study.

✓ I studied economics which needs a large quantity of calculations, so I usually write when I study.

这里的主语是单数的"economics"，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"needs"。另外，"calculation"应使用复数形式"calculations"，因为表示大量的计算。

× I like to write down the happy or important moment because I usually forget this kind of things and so I must write down on paper and put it on my desk as a reminder.

✓ I like to write down the happy or important moments because I usually forget these kinds of things, so I must write them down on paper and put it on my desk as a reminder.

"moment"应使用复数形式"moments"，因为指多个时刻。"this kind of things"应改为"these kinds of things"，以匹配复数。"write down on paper"应为"write them down on paper"，需要加宾语代词。

× When I feel upset, I will look at it and it will give me courage as well as some good.

✓ When I feel upset, I will look at it and it will give me courage as well as some good feelings.

"some good"不完整，应补充名词"feelings"，使表达完整。

× No, because what I wrote down was things that happened before so I I never change it and keep the really feeling at that time.

✓ No, because what I wrote down were things that happened before, so I never change it and keep the real feeling at that time.

"was things"主谓不一致，应改为"were things"。"really feeling"应为形容词修饰名词，改为"real feeling"。

× No, because what I wrote down was things that happened before so I I never change it and keep the really feeling at that time.

✓ No, because what I wrote down were things that happened before, so I never change them and keep the real feelings at that time.

"change it"中的"it"应改为复数代词"them"，因为指代复数"things"。"feeling"应使用复数形式"feelings"，表示多种感受。

× I prefer typing, it allows me to type at any time and anywhere without restriction of paper or pen, which is really convenient. And also if you have some little mistakes, it's easy for us to correct the mistake. However, the.

✓ I prefer typing because it allows me to type at any time and anywhere without the restriction of paper or pen, which is really convenient. Also, if you make some small mistakes, it's easy for us to correct them. However, the sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished.

原句中逗号连接两个独立句子，需用连词或分号连接。"some little mistakes"表达不自然，改为"some small mistakes"。"correct the mistake"应改为复数"correct them"。最后一句不完整，需要补充完整。