Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa rõ ràng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không phù hợp (ví dụ: 'Rice brings a lot of benefits' không đúng ngữ cảnh). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp lại và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn.

Example: Yes, I write quite often because I am a high school student and I have to complete many assignments. Besides schoolwork, I enjoy writing short stories to express my creativity.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'I quite keen on' nên là 'I am quite keen on'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi như 'phenomenons' (phải là 'phenomena'). Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I am quite keen on writing novels and stories about daily life and scientific phenomena, such as how rain forms or how animals sleep at night, because they help me learn and enjoy literature.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng thì và cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'I convinced' nên là 'I am convinced'. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và dùng liên từ để nối ý.

Example: That's a tough question because I can't imagine my future, but I am convinced that my writing will improve a lot, especially in vocabulary, grammar, and accuracy.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ 'is could foster' không đúng, 'short term memorable' nên là 'short-term memory', 'literal' nên là 'literary'. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng và chính xác hơn.

Example: To be honest, I prefer handwriting because it helps improve my short-term memory and provides a more personal and creative experience than typing.

× Besides that, Rice brings a lot of benefits to me, so I quite keen on that type of expression and.

✓ Besides that, writing brings a lot of benefits to me, so I am quite keen on that type of expression.

The word 'Rice' is incorrect here; it should be 'writing'. Also, the phrase 'I quite keen on' is missing the verb 'am'. The correct preposition is 'keen on'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and', which should be removed for clarity.

× Well honestly I quite keen on writing especially in writing novels or stories that related to daily life and scientific phenomenons like rain or how animals sleep at night because it bring a lot of literary and knowledge to me.

✓ Well honestly, I am quite keen on writing, especially writing novels or stories that are related to daily life and scientific phenomena like rain or how animals sleep at night because it brings a lot of literature and knowledge to me.

The phrase 'I quite keen' lacks the verb 'am'. 'That related' should be 'that are related' to agree with plural 'stories'. 'Phenomenons' is incorrect; the plural of 'phenomenon' is 'phenomena'. 'It bring' should be 'it brings' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Literary' should be 'literature' as a noun.

× That's a tough question because I can't imagine how my future could be, but I convinced that my writing will enhance a lot, especially in terms of lexical resource, grammar and accuracy.

✓ That's a tough question because I can't imagine how my future will be, but I am convinced that my writing will improve a lot, especially in terms of lexical resource, grammar, and accuracy.

The phrase 'I convinced' is incorrect; it should be 'I am convinced' to express belief. 'Could be' is less certain; 'will be' fits better here. 'Enhance' is a transitive verb and needs an object; 'improve' is more appropriate here. Added commas for clarity.

× Wow, to be honest I would prefer handwriting because writing by my hand is could foster my short term memorable and bring a lot of literal and knowledge that typing can't provide.

✓ Wow, to be honest, I would prefer handwriting because writing by hand could foster my short-term memory and bring a lot of literature and knowledge that typing can't provide.

The phrase 'is could foster' is incorrect; 'could foster' alone is correct. 'By my hand' should be 'by hand'. 'Short term memorable' is incorrect; it should be 'short-term memory'. 'Literal' should be 'literature' as a noun.