Part 1
Examiner
Do you write a lot?
Candidate
No, I don't like writing. I think it is terrible and I prefer to. Use to record something.
Examiner
What do you like to write? Why?
Candidate
Maybe some maybe some significant things or on the things I can't forget to do if it is not necessary to write something I never touch.
Examiner
Do you think the things you write would change?
Candidate
No, I don't think so. I always write something important and if I write it, it's almost it. Possibly list or plan and I will do do them soon as soon as possible.
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Candidate
Absolutely typing handwriting need many things like pen, paper and it is unconvenient if I sing sing out something whenever I am.
Do you write a lot?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答不够连贯,表达不自然,且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点,避免断句错误,并使用完整句子。
Example: No, I don't write a lot because I find it boring. I usually write only when I need to record important information.
What do you like to write? Why?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 回答重复且表达不清晰,缺乏连贯性。建议使用清晰的句子结构,避免重复,并具体说明写作内容和原因。
Example: I like to write important notes or reminders because they help me remember tasks I must complete.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和重复,表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的语法,避免重复,并清楚表达观点。
Example: No, I don't think the things I write change. I usually write lists or plans, and I try to complete them as soon as possible.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答表达不清,语法和词汇使用错误较多。建议简洁表达偏好,说明原因,并使用正确的词汇和句式。
Example: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient than handwriting, which requires pen and paper.
× I think it is terrible and I prefer to. Use to record something.
✓ I think it is terrible and I prefer to use it to record something.
句子结构错误,'prefer to.'后面不应断开,应与后面的动词短语连用,形成完整句子。应将两部分合并为'I prefer to use it to record something'。
× Maybe some maybe some significant things or on the things I can't forget to do if it is not necessary to write something I never touch.
✓ Maybe some significant things or things I can't forget to do. If it is not necessary to write something, I never touch it.
句子结构混乱,缺少标点和连接词,导致表达不清。应拆分为两个句子,并补充必要的代词和标点,使句子通顺。
× No, I don't think so. I always write something important and if I write it, it's almost it. Possibly list or plan and I will do do them soon as soon as possible.
✓ No, I don't think so. I always write something important, and if I write it, it's almost final. Possibly a list or plan, and I will do them as soon as possible.
句子结构不完整且重复,'it's almost it'表达不清,'do do'重复。应调整句子结构,去除重复,补充冠词,使表达清晰。
× Absolutely typing handwriting need many things like pen, paper and it is unconvenient if I sing sing out something whenever I am.
✓ Absolutely, typing is better. Handwriting needs many things like pen and paper, and it is inconvenient if I want to write something whenever I am out.
形容词拼写错误('unconvenient'应为'inconvenient'),句子缺少动词,'sing sing'应为'write'或类似表达。应纠正拼写,补充动词,使句子语义明确。