Part 1
Examiner
Do you write a lot?
Candidate
Not really. Nowadays I prefer testing on my phone rather than writing by hand because it's more convenient.
Examiner
What do you like to write? Why?
Candidate
Sometimes I will write A to do list for myself in order to remember what things I need to do in a whole day.
Examiner
Do you think the things you write would change?
Candidate
Yes, of course. When I was a child I often write my assignments or Diaries, but nowadays I write some To Do List.
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Candidate
I prefer typing because it's more convenient and time saving because I can revise the things I write easier.
Do you write a lot?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中存在拼写错误(testing 应为 texting),且表达不够自然,建议使用更准确的词汇并避免错误。
Example: Not really. Nowadays, I prefer texting on my phone rather than writing by hand because it's more convenient.
What do you like to write? Why?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答结构基本合理,但句子中有大小写错误(A to do list 应为 a to-do list),且表达稍显简单,建议使用连词使句子更流畅。
Example: Sometimes I write a to-do list for myself so that I can remember all the tasks I need to complete during the day.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 时态使用不准确(write 应为 wrote),且单词大小写不规范(Diaries, To Do List),建议注意时态和大小写,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Example: Yes, of course. When I was a child, I often wrote assignments or diaries, but nowadays I write to-do lists instead.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 句子中重复使用 because,表达略显冗余,建议使用连接词优化句子结构,使表达更自然。
Example: I prefer typing because it's more convenient and time-saving, allowing me to revise what I write more easily.
× Nowadays I prefer testing on my phone rather than writing by hand because it's more convenient.
✓ Nowadays I prefer to test on my phone rather than write by hand because it's more convenient.
动词prefer后面通常接不定式to do,而不是动名词doing形式。这里应使用不定式to test和write。
× Sometimes I will write A to do list for myself in order to remember what things I need to do in a whole day.
✓ Sometimes I will write a to-do list for myself in order to remember what things I need to do in a whole day.
英文中“to-do list”是固定搭配,且首字母小写,且“a”应小写。
× When I was a child I often write my assignments or Diaries, but nowadays I write some To Do List.
✓ When I was a child I often wrote my assignments or diaries, but nowadays I write some to-do lists.
过去时态中,动词write应改为wrote;diaries和to-do lists应小写且复数形式。
× When I was a child I often write my assignments or Diaries, but nowadays I write some To Do List.
✓ When I was a child I often wrote my assignments or diaries, but nowadays I write some to-do lists.
diaries和to-do lists应使用复数形式,表示多份日记和多份待办事项。
× I prefer typing because it's more convenient and time saving because I can revise the things I write easier.
✓ I prefer typing because it's more convenient and time-saving because I can revise the things I write more easily.
time-saving作为形容词应连字符连接;副词easier应改为more easily修饰动词revise。