Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词有些错误，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意时态和单复数的正确使用，同时避免重复表达。

Example: Yes, I do write a lot. Although digital devices are popular in my country, I still prefer writing on paper because it helps me practice my calligraphy and remember information more effectively.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够清晰的问题，建议使用更具体的词汇，并避免重复。

Example: I enjoy writing poems and quotes because they allow me to express my emotions and improve my calligraphy skills.

Suggestion: 回答中时态使用不当，且表达不够流畅。建议注意时态一致性，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Example: Of course. When I was a child, I preferred writing diaries to express my feelings, but now I usually write study notes because I have less free time.

Suggestion: 回答表达了观点，但有重复和语法错误。建议简洁表达并避免重复。

Example: I prefer handwriting because I'm not very familiar with typing on a keyboard, so writing by hand feels more comfortable for me.

× Of course, although paperless study is become popular in my countries, I still prefer writing on papers.

✓ Of course, although paperless study has become popular in my country, I still prefer writing on paper.

这里的时态应该用现在完成时，表示从过去到现在的变化，'is become'是不正确的表达，正确的是'has become'。另外，'countries'应为单数'country'，因为通常指的是自己所在的国家。'papers'应为不可数名词'paper'。

× Of course, although paperless study is become popular in my countries, I still prefer writing on papers.

✓ Of course, although paperless study has become popular in my country, I still prefer writing on paper.

'countries'应为单数'country'，因为通常指的是自己所在的国家。'papers'应为不可数名词'paper'，表示纸张的总称。

× I'm keen on writing some words.

✓ I'm keen on writing words.

'some words'在这里不太合适，写作通常不说写'一些词'，而是直接说'writing words'更自然。

× I think writing words on the papers can express my emotion betters and also it's a great way to practice my calligraphy skills.

✓ I think writing words on paper can express my emotions better and also it's a great way to practice my calligraphy skills.

'papers'应为不可数名词'paper'，'emotion'应为复数'emotions'，'betters'是错误的，正确用法是'adverb'形式'better'。

× Of of course, when I was a child, I prefer to write some Diaries on the papers to express my emotions, but now I have no time to write that.

✓ Of course, when I was a child, I preferred to write some diaries on paper to express my emotions, but now I have no time to write that.

描述过去的习惯动作应使用过去时，'prefer'应改为'preferred'。'Diaries'首字母不需要大写，'papers'应为不可数名词'paper'。

× Of of course, when I was a child, I prefer to write some Diaries on the papers to express my emotions, but now I have no time to write that.

✓ Of course, when I was a child, I preferred to write some diaries on paper to express my emotions, but now I have no time to write that.

'Diaries'是复数形式，首字母不应大写。'papers'应为不可数名词'paper'。

× I prefer to write some study note on the paper.

✓ I prefer to write some study notes on paper.

'note'应为复数'notes'，'the paper'改为不可数名词'paper'更自然。

× It's really change a lot.

✓ It has really changed a lot.

这里应使用现在完成时，表示从过去到现在的变化，'change'应改为过去分词'changed'，并加助动词'has'。

× I prefer handwriting when I'm writing.

✓ I prefer handwriting when I'm writing.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× I'm not keen on typing on the computers because I I'm not familiar with the keyboard, so the handwriting is more suitable for me.

✓ I'm not keen on typing on computers because I'm not familiar with the keyboard, so handwriting is more suitable for me.

'the computers'应去掉定冠词，改为复数形式'computers'，'the handwriting'前的定冠词不必要，改为'uncountable'名词'handwriting'。多余的'I'应删除。