Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答表达了写作频率，但语言不够自然，有语法错误且表达不够简洁。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意语法和句子结构。

Example: Yes, I write quite often because I have reading tasks every day. For example, writing essay assignments from my teachers is part of my daily routine.

Suggestion: 回答内容较完整，但时态和表达有误，且句子稍显冗长。建议注意时态一致，简化句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。

Example: I prefer writing essays. Since I majored in finance at university, writing finance-related essays helps me learn more about financial events and improve my writing skills, which is very helpful.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议理清句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，使表达更准确。

Example: Definitely. I believe what I write will change a lot in the future because I am currently an undergraduate student and might change my major. Therefore, my writing topics will be different from now.

Suggestion: 回答较为自然，但“emergency events”表达不准确，建议使用更合适的词汇，并注意句子连贯性。

Example: It depends on what I need to write. I prefer typing when I have urgent tasks to finish, but I like handwriting letters because it helps me express my true feelings better.

× I have read task every day.

✓ I have reading tasks every day.

这里的“task”应该用复数形式“tasks”，因为表示每天有多个任务。

× writing essays assignment from our teachers are my daily life.

✓ writing essay assignments from our teachers are my daily life.

“essays assignment”应改为复数形式“essay assignments”，表示多个作文任务。

× I major in finance, so writing some finance essays can let me know more about finance events and also exercise my writing skills.

✓ I am majoring in finance, so writing some finance essays helps me learn more about finance events and also exercise my writing skills.

“I major”应使用现在进行时“am majoring”，表示正在进行的学习；“can let me know”改为“helps me learn”更自然。

× I think it was quite helpful.

✓ I think it is quite helpful.

这里谈论的是现在的感受，应该用现在时“is”。

× I think the things are right will change greatly in the future because as I am a graduate undergraduate student, maybe in the future I will change my major.

✓ I think the things that are right will change greatly in the future because as I am a graduate undergraduate student, maybe in the future I will change my major.

缺少关系代词“that”，使句子完整。

× So the things that I write will be definitely different compared with nowadays.

✓ So the things that I write will definitely be different compared with nowadays.

“will be definitely”中副词位置不正确，应为“will definitely be”。

× I prefer typing when there's emergency events that I have to finish, but when I read letters, I prefer writing by hand because it can express my true feeling.

✓ I prefer typing when there are emergency events that I have to finish, but when I read letters, I prefer writing by hand because it can express my true feelings.

“there's”应改为“there are”因为“events”是复数；“feeling”应为复数“feelings”，表示多种感情。