Writing— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you write a lot?
Candidate
Well, I write quite frequently because it is one of my favorite hobbies and helps me express my thought clearly. When I was young, I used to write in my diary and create short stories regularly, which improved my creativity. Nowadays, I often write posts and articles online, which makes my life more colorful and interesting by allowing to connect with others and share my ideas.
Examiner
What do you like to write? Why?
Candidate
When I was young, I liked to write stories about animals and plants that could do things humans do because it allowed me to use my imagination. Nowadays, I often write about small everyday things around our lives because I find them fascinating and relatable. Writing helps me express my thoughts and observe the world more closely.
Examiner
Do you think the things you write would change?
Candidate
From my perspective, I do think the things I write will change over time. As we grow up, our minds change and we become more mature, so our opinions and the way we perceive the world also evolve. For example, when I was younger, I used to write about simple diary events, but now I tend to focus more on deeper topics like personal growth and social issues.
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Candidate
Frankly, I prefer handwriting because it feels more intimate and engaging than typing. Using a pen helps me express my thoughts and emotions more deeply, which makes me feel more connected to my ideas. For instance, when I would write by hand, especially in the journal or when drafting creative stories, I find myself more focused and inspired.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
Score: 85.0Suggestion: 回答内容较丰富且结构清晰，但部分表达略显冗长，且“express my thought”应为“express my thoughts”，建议注意单复数一致性，并适当简化句子，使表达更自然流畅。
Example: Yes, I write quite often because it's one of my favorite hobbies and helps me express my thoughts clearly. When I was younger, I kept a diary and wrote short stories, which boosted my creativity. Now, I usually write posts and articles online to connect with others and share my ideas.
What do you like to write? Why?
Score: 90.0Suggestion: 回答内容具体且连贯，表达清晰自然。建议在连接句子时使用更多连接词，如“because”、“so that”等，以增强逻辑性和流畅度。
Example: When I was young, I liked writing stories about animals and plants that acted like humans because it allowed me to use my imagination. Now, I often write about small everyday things around us because I find them fascinating and relatable. Writing helps me express my thoughts and observe the world more closely.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Score: 92.0Suggestion: 回答内容丰富且结构合理，表达自然。建议在句子间加入更多连接词，如“therefore”、“for instance”，以增强语句的连贯性和逻辑性。
Example: I believe the things I write will change over time. As we grow and mature, our opinions and perspectives evolve. For instance, when I was younger, I wrote about simple diary events; now, I focus more on deeper topics like personal growth and social issues.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Score: 88.0Suggestion: 回答表达较好，但“when I would write by hand”用法不够自然，建议改为“when I write by hand”。同时，适当增加连接词如“especially”前后衔接词，提升表达流畅度。
Example: I prefer handwriting because it feels more intimate and engaging than typing. Using a pen helps me express my thoughts and emotions more deeply, so I feel more connected to my ideas. For example, when I write by hand, especially in my journal or when drafting creative stories, I find myself more focused and inspired.
Grammar
× Nowadays, I often write posts and articles online, which makes my life more colorful and interesting by allowing to connect with others and share my ideas.
✓ Nowadays, I often write posts and articles online, which makes my life more colorful and interesting by allowing me to connect with others and share my ideas.
此处缺少主语“me”，导致动词不定式短语不完整。应补充“me”使句子完整，表达“允许我连接他人并分享我的想法”。
× For instance, when I would write by hand, especially in the journal or when drafting creative stories, I find myself more focused and inspired.
✓ For instance, when I write by hand, especially in the journal or when drafting creative stories, I find myself more focused and inspired.
此处使用“would”不符合一般现在时的语境，应使用一般现在时“write”表示习惯动作。
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