Writing— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you write a lot?
Candidate
Oh yes, I often write diary, but as the development of the computer technology, I prefer to write what I want to express with my computer, not my pen and paper.
Examiner
What do you like to write? Why?
Candidate
Well, just what I said before, I'd like to write a diary because in my opinion, writing diary can report the beautiful moment in my daily life.
Examiner
Do you think the things you write would change?
Candidate
Oh yes, absolutely everything in the world is changing day by day. But the most important thing is that I should insist on writing.
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Candidate
Well, I prefer typing because it's so convenient for me to write something on the computer and at the same time I needn't to worry about losing the information.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“write diary”应为“write a diary”或“keep a diary”，以及“as the development of the computer technology”表达不准确。建议加强语法基础，使用更自然的表达方式。
Example: Yes, I often keep a diary, but with the development of computer technology, I prefer typing on my computer rather than writing with pen and paper.
What do you like to write? Why?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中“writing diary”应为“writing a diary”，且表达略显重复和不够具体。建议使用更丰富的词汇和具体细节来支持观点。
Example: I enjoy writing a diary because it helps me capture and remember the beautiful moments I experience every day.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答偏离了问题的核心，未直接回答“写的内容是否会改变”，且表达不够连贯。建议直接回应问题，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。
Example: Yes, the things I write do change over time because my thoughts and experiences evolve, but I always try to keep writing regularly.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答表达基本清晰，但存在语法错误，如“needn't to worry”应为“don't need to worry”。建议注意语法细节，提升表达准确性。
Example: I prefer typing because it is very convenient, and I don't need to worry about losing my work when I write on the computer.
Grammar
× I often write diary, but as the development of the computer technology, I prefer to write what I want to express with my computer, not my pen and paper.
✓ I often write diaries, but as the development of computer technology progresses, I prefer to write what I want to express with my computer, not my pen and paper.
“diary” 应该用复数形式“diaries”，因为这里指的是多篇日记。
× as the development of the computer technology
✓ as the development of computer technology progresses
“as the development of the computer technology”表达不完整且不自然，应该加上动词“progresses”来完整表达“随着计算机技术的发展”。
× writing diary can report the beautiful moment in my daily life.
✓ writing a diary can record the beautiful moments in my daily life.
“diary”前应加冠词“a”，且“moment”应为复数“moments”，因为生活中有多个美好时刻。
× writing diary can report the beautiful moment in my daily life.
✓ writing a diary can record the beautiful moments in my daily life.
“report”用法不当，日记是记录（record）而非报告（report）。
× I should insist on writing.
✓ I should keep insisting on writing.
“insist on writing”表达不够自然，建议用“keep insisting on writing”表示持续坚持写作。
× I needn't to worry about losing the information.
✓ I needn't worry about losing the information.
“needn't”后面不加“to”，正确结构是“needn't worry”。
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