Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "such As" and "like take things". To improve, focus on using correct prepositions and clearer expressions. Also, try to avoid redundancy and keep your sentences concise and natural. Using linking words like "because" and "so" is good, but ensure they connect ideas smoothly.

Example: No, I don't write very often because I usually only write when it's necessary, such as for work or school assignments. Instead, I prefer using social media and messaging apps to communicate quickly, like sending texts or voice messages, since writing can be time-consuming.

Suggestion: Your answer shows good ideas but has several language errors and unclear phrases, such as "diary diary everyday", "during stage", and "a huge linguist". To improve, use correct vocabulary and grammar, and clarify your points. Also, avoid repetition and ensure your supporting details are specific and relevant. Linking words like "because" and "which" are used well but need clearer context.

Example: To be honest, I write in my diary every day because it helps me organise my thoughts and reflect on my daily experiences. Writing regularly allows me to remember what I did during the day, which improves my memory and helps me understand myself better.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but contains several grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions, such as "style of I love right" and "style of mind writing". To improve, focus on correct sentence structure and vocabulary. Use linking words like "for example" and "additionally" effectively, but ensure the ideas are clearly expressed and specific.

Example: Yes, I believe the style of my writing will change over time as I gain more experience and knowledge. For example, my perspective on certain topics may influence how I express my ideas. Additionally, advances in technology and changes in culture can also affect the content and style of my writing.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrases, such as "handy writing", "an essays", and "prefer choose typing things". To improve, use correct verb forms and vocabulary. Also, organise your answer clearly with linking words like "for instance" and "however" to make your points coherent and natural.

Example: Actually, it depends on what I am writing. For instance, I prefer handwriting when taking notes or writing essays because it helps me remember information better. However, for work-related tasks, I prefer typing since it is faster and more convenient, especially when I need to edit documents quickly.

× I tend to rely more on social media and messaging apps to communicate with others, like take things or sending voice messages.

✓ I tend to rely more on social media and messaging apps to communicate with others, like taking things or sending voice messages.

The verb 'take' should be in the gerund form 'taking' to match the parallel structure with 'sending' which is correctly in the -ing form. When listing activities, verbs should be consistently in the same form.

× To be honest, I write diary diary everyday and I love it because it's helped me organize my thoughts and reflect on my daily experiences.

✓ To be honest, I write a diary every day and I love it because it's helped me organize my thoughts and reflect on my daily experiences.

The word 'diary' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a'. Also, 'everyday' is an adjective meaning 'commonplace'; the correct phrase for 'each day' is 'every day' as two words.

× Writing regularly allows me to recall everything I did during stage, which improves my memory and help me understand my best.

✓ Writing regularly allows me to recall everything I did during the stage, which improves my memory and helps me understand my best.

The phrase 'during stage' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'stage'. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'which' (referring to the act of recalling).

× I consider writing a diary as a huge linguist.

✓ I consider writing a diary as a huge linguistic benefit.

The word 'linguist' is a noun meaning a person who studies languages, which does not fit here. The intended meaning is likely 'linguistic' (adjective) or 'linguistic benefit' to describe the value of writing a diary.

× Yes, I believe the style of I love right would change over time as I gain more experience and knowledge.

✓ Yes, I believe the style of my writing would change over time as I gain more experience and knowledge.

The phrase 'the style of I love right' is incorrect. It should be 'the style of my writing' to correctly use the possessive pronoun 'my' and the noun 'writing'.

× For example, my perspective on certain topic can change the way I express my idea.

✓ For example, my perspective on certain topics can change the way I express my ideas.

'Topic' and 'idea' should be plural ('topics' and 'ideas') because 'certain' implies more than one, and the sentence refers to multiple perspectives and expressions.

× Additionally, the factor like advance in technology and change in culture also affect content and style of mind writing.

✓ Additionally, factors like advances in technology and changes in culture also affect the content and style of my writing.

'Factor' should be plural 'factors' to agree with 'like advances and changes'. 'Advance' and 'change' should be plural. 'Content and style of mind writing' is incorrect; it should be 'the content and style of my writing' to use the correct possessive pronoun and article.

× Actually it depend on what I am writing.

✓ Actually, it depends on what I am writing.

The verb 'depend' needs to agree with the third person singular subject 'it', so it should be 'depends'. Also, a comma after 'Actually' improves clarity.

× For instance, I prefer handy writing when talking, taking notes or an essays because it helps me remember the information more effectively.

✓ For instance, I prefer handwriting when talking, taking notes or writing essays because it helps me remember the information more effectively.

'Handy writing' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'handwriting'. 'An essays' is incorrect; 'essays' is plural and does not need 'an'. Also, 'writing essays' is clearer than just 'essays'.

× However, for work related tasks, I prefer choose typing things as it's faster and more convenient especially when I needed to edit documents quickly.

✓ However, for work-related tasks, I prefer typing things as it's faster and more convenient, especially when I need to edit documents quickly.

'Prefer choose typing' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer typing'. 'Work related' should be hyphenated as 'work-related'. 'Needed' should be present tense 'need' to match the present context. A comma before 'especially' improves readability.