Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并且直接回答问题。

Example: No, I don't write a lot because I think my writing skills are not very good, and I usually don't have important things to write down.

Suggestion: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，建议使用完整句子并用连接词使表达更流畅，同时具体说明写作内容。

Example: If I have to write, I usually jot down ideas that come to me while coding or reading books, because I think organizing these thoughts might help me write a good book someday.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误，表达不够清晰，建议注意时态和主谓一致，并具体说明写作风格如何变化。

Example: Yes, as I get older and gain more experiences, my views change, so the things I write and my writing style will also change accordingly.

Suggestion: 回答较为自然，但句子结尾不完整，建议完整表达观点并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Example: I prefer typing on my phone or computer because my handwriting is very bad, and I can't stand looking at it. Also, I can type very fast, which makes writing more efficient.

× No, that's not I'm not that fond of writing because I've got terrible writing skills and I really don't think I've got something that I have to write down.

✓ No, I'm not that fond of writing because I've got terrible writing skills and I really don't think I have something that I have to write down.

句子中出现了多余的否定结构“that's not I'm not”，导致句子结构混乱。应删除“that's not”，使句子结构正确。

× If I have to write, it must be. Might be some thought that suddenly occurred to me when I am coding or reading books, and I think if I organize those thoughts together, I may write a famous book with in.

✓ If I have to write, it must be some thoughts that suddenly occur to me when I am coding or reading books, and I think if I organize those thoughts together, I may write a famous book within.

句子中“it must be.”后面断句不完整，应与后文合并；“Might be some thought”缺少主语，应改为“it must be some thoughts”；“occurred”时态与后文“when I am coding”不一致，应改为一般现在时“occur”；“with in”应写为一个词“within”。

× Yes, of course, with you're getting older, you may experience more and you may have a different view about everything you've experienced.

✓ Yes, of course, as you get older, you may experience more and you may have a different view about everything you've experienced.

“with you're getting older”中“you're”是“you are”的缩写，不适合此处，应改为“as you get older”表示随着年龄增长。

× And of course with that change changes you, your Chinese style may change too.

✓ And of course, with that change changing you, your Chinese style may change too.

“with that change changes you”结构不正确，应使用现在分词“changing”表示伴随状况。

× I prefer to write on phone and my computer because my handwriting is really bad and even myself can't bear to see those ugly words I wrote down.

✓ I prefer to write on my phone and my computer because my handwriting is really bad and even I can't bear to see those ugly words I wrote down.

“on phone”缺少冠词，应为“on my phone”；“even myself can't bear”中“myself”用法错误，主语应为“I”。