Writing— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you write a lot?
Candidate
Yes I do because my major is Chinese language and literature so I always need to do some writings to finish my homework and dissertations and also I like writing because it's my hobby.
Examiner
What do you like to write? Why?
Candidate
I'd like to write some Diaries and novels. For Diaries it's can record my wonderful life and when I write writing some Diaries it can make me happy and relaxed and for novels I think.
Examiner
Do you think the things you write would change?
Candidate
Yes, I do. The thing I write can be changed over time because when I get older and gain more experience, the topic can be more complicated and the writing skills.
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Candidate
I prefer typewriting because I think typewriting is very convenient for me to write something I like. Also, I think typewriting is very clear and it's a popular way to do some writing and.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 你的回答表达了写作的原因，但句子较长且结构不够清晰，建议使用更简洁的句子并注意语法，如“writings”应改为“writing”。
Example: Yes, I write a lot because my major is Chinese language and literature. I often have to complete homework and dissertations. Besides, writing is also my hobby.
What do you like to write? Why?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，建议完整表达观点，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子连贯。
Example: I like to write diaries and novels. Diaries help me record my wonderful life and make me feel happy and relaxed. As for novels, I enjoy creating stories and expressing my imagination.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中表达不够完整，句子结构不清晰，建议补充完整句子并使用连接词。
Example: Yes, I think what I write will change over time. As I get older and gain more experience, my topics become more complicated and my writing skills improve.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和句子未完成，建议使用更自然的表达并完成句子。
Example: I prefer typing because it is very convenient and clear. Also, typing is a popular way to write nowadays.
Grammar
× I always need to do some writings to finish my homework and dissertations
✓ I always need to do some writing to finish my homework and dissertations
“writings”通常指多篇作品，但这里指写作活动，应该用不可数名词“writing”。
× For Diaries it's can record my wonderful life
✓ For diaries, they can record my wonderful life
“it”指代复数名词“diaries”不正确，应使用复数代词“they”。
× when I write writing some Diaries it can make me happy and relaxed
✓ when I write some diaries, it can make me happy and relaxed
“write writing”重复，且“Diaries”不应大写，且“it”指代写日记的行为，单数代词正确。
× The thing I write can be changed over time because when I get older and gain more experience, the topic can be more complicated and the writing skills.
✓ The things I write can change over time because when I get older and gain more experience, the topics can be more complicated and the writing skills can improve.
“thing”应为复数“things”与“the things I write”对应；“topic”应为复数“topics”；句子不完整，补充“can improve”使句意完整。
× I prefer typewriting because I think typewriting is very convenient for me to write something I like.
✓ I prefer typing because I think typing is very convenient for me to write what I like.
“typewriting”用法不当，常用“typing”；“write something I like”表达不自然，改为“write what I like”。
× Also, I think typewriting is very clear and it's a popular way to do some writing and.
✓ Also, I think typing is very clear and it's a popular way to do some writing.
句子末尾“and”多余，导致句子结构不完整，应去掉。
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