Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: حاول تحسين تركيب الجمل لتكون أكثر وضوحًا وطبيعية، وقلل من الأخطاء النحوية. استخدم جمل قصيرة ومترابطة لتوضيح روتينك في الكتابة بشكل أفضل.

Example: Yes, I write every day because I want to improve my writing skills. Usually, I take a pen and notebook before I sleep and write about my day.

Suggestion: ركز على استخدام جمل واضحة ومنظمة مع تفاصيل محددة. حاول استخدام كلمات مناسبة لوصف الذكريات والأحداث بدقة أكبر.

Example: I like to write about important events from my childhood and memorable experiences because they make me feel happy and bring back good memories.

Suggestion: حاول استخدام جمل أكثر وضوحًا وربط الأفكار بشكل منطقي. استخدم كلمات مناسبة للتعبير عن التغيرات الزمنية وتأثيرها على الكتابة.

Example: Yes, I believe what I write will change over time because life changes quickly, and my thoughts and feelings will also change.

Suggestion: حاول تحسين تركيب الجمل واستخدام تعبيرات أكثر طبيعية. اشرح أسباب تفضيلك بشكل واضح مع ربط الأفكار باستخدام كلمات ربط مناسبة.

Example: I prefer handwriting because I write faster on paper. Typing stresses me out since I don't like looking at the screen for too long.

× Actually I daily write some say because I want to improve my writing.

✓ Actually, I write every day because I want to improve my writing.

The phrase 'daily write some say' is incorrect in present tense usage and word order. The correct expression is 'write every day' to indicate habitual action in the present tense.

× So I at night before I sleep I take my pen and note.

✓ So at night before I sleep, I take my pen and notebook.

The preposition 'at' should precede 'night' without 'I' in between. Also, 'note' should be 'notebook' to correctly refer to the object used for writing.

× Then I write all of things.

✓ Then I write about all the things.

The phrase 'all of things' is incorrect; it should be 'all the things' or 'about all the things' to properly quantify and refer to the objects.

× I make it of my day.

✓ I make it part of my day.

The phrase 'make it of my day' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'part of' to express inclusion.

× To be honest, I like to write the most important events was in the when I was a child and the remarkable memorize.

✓ To be honest, I like to write about the most important events that happened when I was a child and remarkable memories.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and tense usage. 'Was in the when' is incorrect; it should be 'that happened when'. Also, 'memorize' should be 'memories' as a noun.

× This lets me in the good mood and feel happy.

✓ This puts me in a good mood and makes me feel happy.

The phrase 'lets me in the good mood' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'puts me in a good mood'. Also, 'feel happy' needs a subject 'makes me' to be grammatically correct.

× Yes, I think that because the time is in the present is change very quickly some.

✓ Yes, I think that because time in the present changes very quickly.

The phrase 'is change' is incorrect; the verb should be in present simple 'changes' to agree with the singular subject 'time'. The word 'some' is unnecessary and misplaced.

× So I think it will change.

✓ So I think it will change.

This sentence is correct in future tense usage; no correction needed.

× To be honest, I prefer handwriting because I'm fast on the paper.

✓ To be honest, I prefer handwriting because I'm faster with paper.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; 'with paper' is the correct expression. Also, comparative 'faster' is appropriate to express preference.

× On the contrary, the typing make me stress because I don't like to the screen more more time.

✓ On the contrary, typing makes me stressed because I don't like the screen for a long time.

'Typing' is singular and requires 'makes' not 'make'. 'Stress' should be 'stressed' as an adjective. The phrase 'like to the screen more more time' is incorrect; it should be 'like the screen for a long time'.