Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и избыточность. Следует использовать правильные формы глаголов и избегать повторов. Также стоит структурировать ответ, начиная с общего утверждения, затем приводя конкретные примеры.

Example: Yes, I write quite a lot because it helps me feel calm and clear-headed. For instance, I write poems and short stories every day at school.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит ошибки в грамматике и структуре предложения, а также неясные выражения. Рекомендуется четко сформулировать мысль, использовать правильные времена и избегать тавтологии.

Example: I like writing essays because they allow me to express my own opinions on different topics, which makes the writing unique and personal.

Suggestion: Ответ нечеткий и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать более ясные выражения и правильные конструкции, а также связать идеи логично с помощью союзов.

Example: Yes, I believe my writing will change over time because if I want to improve, I need to start by changing myself first.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит множество грамматических ошибок и неясных выражений. Нужно четко выразить предпочтение, использовать правильные формы глаголов и связать идеи логично.

Example: I prefer handwriting because it is different from typing and helps train my hand and fingers to write faster.

× I really enjoyed to write a lot because when I am writing I really feel myself so clear and calm.

✓ I really enjoy writing a lot because when I am writing I really feel so clear and calm.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a verb in the -ing form, not the infinitive 'to write'. Also, 'feel myself so clear and calm' is incorrect; 'feel so clear and calm' is correct because 'feel' here is a linking verb and does not take a reflexive pronoun.

× For example, every day, in every school daily I really write a lot of poem tales and.

✓ For example, every day, at school, I really write a lot of poems and tales.

The noun 'poem' should be plural 'poems' to match 'a lot of'. Also, 'in every school daily' is awkward; 'at school every day' is more natural. The sentence was incomplete and needed correction for clarity.

× I really like to write the essay because the essay it is one-of-a-kind of writing exam which can give you the chance to spend your own.

✓ I really like to write essays because an essay is a one-of-a-kind writing exam that gives you the chance to express your own views.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'essay' when speaking generally; it should be omitted or replaced with 'an' for singular countable nouns. Also, 'spend your own' is incorrect; 'express your own views' is appropriate.

× Your own view are about as special as such theme.

✓ Your own views are as special as the theme.

The subject 'views' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'. The phrase 'about as special as such theme' is awkward; 'as special as the theme' is clearer. Also, 'view' should be plural to match 'are'.

× Yeah, I really believe that the things which I write would change such time, because if I really want to change this thing, I will to start with myself.

✓ Yeah, I really believe that the things I write will change over time, because if I really want to change something, I will start with myself.

The modal verb 'would' is incorrectly used; 'will' is appropriate for future certainty. 'Would change such time' is incorrect; 'will change over time' is correct. Also, 'will to start' is incorrect; 'will start' is correct.

× I really prefer to type handwriting because handwriting is have some change from typing and also the handwriting training your hands fingers to write so fast and.

✓ I really prefer typing by hand because handwriting is different from typing, and handwriting trains your fingers to write faster.

'Prefer to type handwriting' is incorrect; 'prefer typing by hand' or 'handwriting' is correct. 'Handwriting is have some change' is incorrect; 'handwriting is different' is correct. 'Training your hands fingers' is incorrect; 'trains your fingers' is correct. The sentence was incomplete and needed completion for clarity.