Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit long and somewhat unclear due to grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to keep your response concise and grammatically correct by using simple sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details without repeating the same idea.

Example: Yes, I write quite often because I enjoy expressing my thoughts. Recently, one of my stories was published by my school teacher, which made me very proud and motivated to write more.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid repetition. Also, try to be more specific about why you enjoy writing stories.

Example: I like writing story books because they allow me to be creative and imaginative. When I write, my mind works quickly, and I find it easy to put my ideas into words without much difficulty.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons using proper linking words. Avoid vague expressions and focus on clarity.

Example: I don't think my writing style will change because I enjoy writing magical stories. These stories always capture readers' curiosity, so I believe the content should remain consistent to keep their interest.

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by using more natural expressions and better linking words. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and try to be concise.

Example: I prefer typing because it saves time and helps reduce paper waste. Additionally, typing is faster and makes it easy to correct mistakes without using ink, which can sometimes be harmful to health.

× I love to writing a lot of things.

✓ I love writing a lot of things.

After verbs like 'love', the gerund form (verb + -ing) is used instead of the infinitive with 'to'. So, 'love writing' is correct, not 'love to writing'.

× Well I like to write the story books and last time my 1 storybook was published by my teacher in my school and that time was so praising for me and I feel so good that's why and that time I feel I want.

✓ Well, I like to write story books and last time my first storybook was published by my teacher in my school. That time was very praiseworthy for me and I felt so good. That's why at that time I felt I wanted to continue.

'Story books' should be plural without 'the' when speaking generally. '1 storybook' should be 'first storybook' for clarity. 'Praising' is incorrect; 'praiseworthy' or 'praised' fits better. Also, tense consistency is needed: 'feel' should be 'felt' to match past events.

× Well, I like to write a story books because it's very interesting and creative and I just write a story books because when I write it, my brain is working so fast and I write it very easily.

✓ Well, I like to write story books because they are very interesting and creative. I just write story books because when I write them, my brain works very fast and I write very easily.

'A story books' is incorrect because 'a' is singular and 'books' is plural. Use 'story books' without 'a'. Also, 'it's' refers to singular but 'story books' is plural, so use 'they are'. Pronouns should agree in number: 'them' instead of 'it'.

× I'm not facing any difficulties while while they while write it.

✓ I'm not facing any difficulties while writing it.

The phrase 'while they write it' is incorrect here. The correct form is 'while writing it' using the gerund after 'while' to indicate simultaneous action.

× So I think I most.

✓ So I think I mostly enjoy it.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'mostly enjoy it' completes the thought and makes the sentence meaningful.

× Well, I don't think my writing would change because I mostly like to write magical books and I don't think so any change need in that type of books because in a magical books always a once and spends and curiosity to read it.

✓ Well, I don't think my writing will change because I mostly like to write magical books and I don't think any change is needed in that type of books because magical books always have a sense of wonder and curiosity to read them.

'Would' is less certain; 'will' is better for future prediction. 'I don't think so any change need' is incorrect; correct is 'I don't think any change is needed'. 'In a magical books' is wrong; 'magical books' without article is correct. The phrase 'always a once and spends and curiosity' is unclear; replaced with 'have a sense of wonder and curiosity' for clarity.

× That's why I think I've never changed my content.

✓ That's why I think I have never changed my content.

Contraction 'I've' is acceptable but can be expanded for clarity. The sentence is grammatically correct but expanding 'I've' to 'I have' improves formality.

× Well I prefer typing. The reason behind this is it's not so much time consuming and there is no paper wasting and also not any type of ink will use in it which cause any problem to a human health.

✓ Well, I prefer typing. The reason behind this is that it is not very time-consuming, there is no paper wasted, and no type of ink is used in it which causes any problem to human health.

'Not so much time consuming' should be 'not very time-consuming'. 'There is no paper wasting' should be 'there is no paper wasted'. 'Not any type of ink will use' is incorrect; correct is 'no type of ink is used'. 'Cause any problem to a human health' should be 'causes any problem to human health'.

× That's why I mostly like to do typing and it's faster and complete easily if any error come.

✓ That's why I mostly like typing; it's faster and errors can be corrected easily.

'Like to do typing' is awkward; 'like typing' is better. 'Complete easily if any error come' is incorrect; better is 'errors can be corrected easily' for clarity and correct verb form.