Writing— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you write a lot?
Candidate
No, The thing is I never found writing exciting and enjoyable. I just found it rather dull. I more into drawing or painting. I love to use diverse colors to depict the world, people around me and animals.
Examiner
What do you like to write? Why?
Candidate
There's nothing much about writing that I like the most. I don't like writing at all, but if I had to say something I like in writing, I would say I enjoy calligraphy because I consider this is the kind of thing can help me to practice patience.
Examiner
Do you think the things you write would change?
Candidate
Yes, I believe so. When I was little I only can express my thoughts through using simple words and sentences. But now I can use more standard and advanced way to express my feelings and my thoughts.
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Candidate
Well, I still prefer handwriting more. I know some people might think this kind of way of writing might be outdated, but as I'm a fan of calligraphy so I tend to use handwriting to express my feelings.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“I more into drawing or painting”应为“I am more into drawing or painting”。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。
Example: No, I don't write a lot because I find it quite dull. Instead, I prefer drawing or painting, as I enjoy using diverse colors to depict the world, people, and animals around me.
What do you like to write? Why?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答表达较为重复且句子结构不够简洁。建议减少冗余，使用更简洁的句子，并注意语法，如“this is the kind of thing can help me”应为“this is the kind of thing that can help me”。
Example: I don't particularly enjoy writing, but I do like calligraphy because it helps me practice patience and focus.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Score: 80.0Suggestion: 回答内容较好，但存在语法错误，如“I only can express”应为“I could only express”，“more standard and advanced way”应为“more standard and advanced ways”。建议注意时态和复数形式。
Example: Yes, I believe so. When I was little, I could only express my thoughts using simple words and sentences. But now, I can use more standard and advanced ways to express my feelings and ideas.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Score: 78.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法和表达不够自然的问题，如“this kind of way of writing”应简化为“this way of writing”，并注意连接词的使用。建议使句子更简洁流畅。
Example: I prefer handwriting because I am a fan of calligraphy. Although some people think handwriting is outdated, I find it a better way to express my feelings.
Grammar
× I more into drawing or painting.
✓ I am more into drawing or painting.
句子缺少动词，导致表达不完整。应使用动词短语“am more into”来表达“我更喜欢”。
× I consider this is the kind of thing can help me to practice patience.
✓ I consider this is the kind of thing that can help me to practice patience.
缺少关系代词“that”，导致句子结构不完整。应加上“that”引导定语从句。
× When I was little I only can express my thoughts through using simple words and sentences.
✓ When I was little I could only express my thoughts by using simple words and sentences.
过去时态中，情态动词“can”应改为“could”，且“only”位置调整更自然，介词“through”改为“by”更符合表达习惯。
× When I was little I only can express my thoughts through using simple words and sentences.
✓ When I was little I could only express my thoughts by using simple words and sentences.
“through using”搭配不当，表达方式应为“by using”，表示通过某种方式。
× I tend to use handwriting to express my feelings.
✓ I tend to use handwriting for expressing my feelings.
“tend to use handwriting to express”虽可理解，但更地道的表达是“tend to use handwriting for expressing”，强调用途。
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