Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating similar ideas and try to use linking words to connect your points smoothly. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary related to writing and planning.

Example: Yes, I write quite a lot, mainly for planning purposes. For instance, I often jot down my daily tasks and future goals, which helps me stay organized and focused.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat repetitive and could be more structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Also, watch for minor grammar errors and improve sentence flow.

Example: I enjoy writing my daily routines and to-do lists because they help me organize my thoughts and prioritize tasks effectively throughout the day.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and fluency. Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and complete your sentences fully. Use linking words to explain your ideas clearly and provide specific examples to support your points.

Example: Yes, I believe the things I write change over time. For example, when I review my old notebooks, I notice that my goals and perspectives about the future have evolved significantly.

Suggestion: Your answer shows your preference clearly but could be more coherent and grammatically correct. Use linking words like 'although' to contrast ideas and avoid sentence fragments. Also, try to expand your explanation with specific reasons.

Example: Although I can type faster on a computer, I prefer handwriting because it helps me organize my thoughts better and stay focused while writing.

× I really like to write my plans and my daily list and my future goals that I want to achieve, and this is the way I really like to write.

✓ I really like writing my plans, my daily list, and my future goals that I want to achieve, and this is the way I really like to write.

The verb 'like' is often followed by the gerund form (-ing) when expressing preferences or habits. Using 'like to write' is not incorrect, but 'like writing' is more natural and idiomatic in this context.

× Well, as I said, I really like to write my routines and my planning list, the task that I have to do in a day and my future goals.

✓ Well, as I said, I really like to write my routines and my planning lists, the tasks that I have to do in a day, and my future goals.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match 'routines' and 'tasks' because the speaker refers to multiple items. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to agree with 'routines' and 'lists'.

× And this makes me organize my thoughts in my mind and know what should I do in the during the day.

✓ And this helps me organize my thoughts and know what I should do during the day.

The sentence structure is awkward and contains unnecessary words like 'in my mind' and 'the during the day'. The corrected sentence is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Of course yes, because when I look at my old umm notebooks and my old goals, I can see umm that I change my mind and my thoughts are change about future and now I have really. Different.

✓ Of course yes, because when I look at my old notebooks and my old goals, I can see that I changed my mind and my thoughts have changed about the future, and now I am really different.

The verbs 'change' and 'are change' should be in past tense 'changed' and present perfect 'have changed' respectively to correctly describe past and ongoing changes. Also, 'the future' needs the definite article 'the'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I prefer handwriting because it makes my mind to organize my thoughts and it's really helped me to stay focused when I'm writing things down and but typing.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it helps me organize my thoughts and it has really helped me stay focused when I'm writing things down, but typing...

The phrase 'makes my mind to organize' is incorrect; 'helps me organize' is correct. Also, 'it's really helped me' should be 'it has really helped me' for clarity. The conjunction 'and but' is incorrect; 'but' alone is sufficient.

× I'm very faster at typing in digital but I don't really like it.

✓ I'm much faster at typing digitally, but I don't really like it.

'Very faster' is incorrect; 'much faster' is the correct comparative adverb usage. 'Typing in digital' is awkward; 'typing digitally' is more natural. The sentence is restructured for clarity.