Writing— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you write a lot?
Candidate
To be honest, I don't write a lot. I prefer typing or speaking to writing because I think writing is time consuming and typing a message is much quicker than writing and it's much more convenient.
Examiner
What do you like to write? Why?
Candidate
I like to write blogs on my social media because I think it's fun to share my life with my friends and it is interesting to receive feedbacks about how people think about my lifestyle.
Examiner
Do you think the things you write would change?
Candidate
Of course, I think yes, since I'm getting older, my experiences and mind will also change, which will directly affect my writing style or other important things.
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Candidate
I think I prefer typing because it is quicker and much easier to make some changes, and it's also convenient for me to save my work on the computer directly and.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子较长且有些重复，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，使表达更自然流畅。
Example: I don't write much because I find typing messages faster and more convenient than writing by hand.
What do you like to write? Why?
Score: 80.0Suggestion: 回答内容具体，但“feedbacks”应为不可数名词“feedback”，建议注意词汇的正确使用，同时可以用连接词使句子更连贯。
Example: I enjoy writing blogs on social media because it’s fun to share my life with friends and get feedback about their thoughts on my lifestyle.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答中有些重复且表达不够简洁，建议直接回答问题并用具体细节支持，同时避免模糊表达。
Example: Yes, as I grow older, my experiences and thoughts will change, which will influence my writing style and topics.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答未完整结束，且句子结构不够紧凑，建议完整表达观点，避免句尾断裂，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Example: I prefer typing because it’s faster, allows easy editing, and lets me save my work directly on the computer.
Grammar
× it is interesting to receive feedbacks about how people think about my lifestyle.
✓ it is interesting to receive feedback about how people think about my lifestyle.
“feedback”是不可数名词，不能加复数形式“feedbacks”，应使用单数形式。
× I think I prefer typing because it is quicker and much easier to make some changes, and it's also convenient for me to save my work on the computer directly and.
✓ I think I prefer typing because it is quicker and much easier to make some changes, and it's also convenient for me to save my work directly on the computer.
句子末尾多余的“and”导致句子结构不完整，应删除“and”，并调整“directly”的位置使句子更通顺。
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