Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần chú ý hơn về ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, bạn nên dùng "Writing helps me express my feelings and creativity" thay vì "Writing have me express my feelings and creative". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh lặp lại và sắp xếp ý rõ ràng hơn.

Example: Yes, I write a lot because it is an important part of my studies and also my favorite hobby. For example, I often write poems about my friends, teachers, or daily life. Writing helps me express my feelings and creativity.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, nên dùng "I enjoy expressing myself through poems" thay vì "I enjoy express myself". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên hoàn chỉnh, tránh bỏ dở câu cuối.

Example: It depends on the situation. Since I'm still a student, I enjoy expressing myself through poems, especially on special occasions. For example, I often write about important events or about my mom because I love her very much, and writing helps me show my feelings.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý dùng từ đúng và câu hoàn chỉnh hơn. Ví dụ, "I have a lot of respect for my younger self" thay vì "I have a lot of respectful". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn để thể hiện ý tốt hơn.

Example: No, I don't think I would change the things I wrote because they represent an important part of my teenage years. I have a lot of respect for my younger self and the courage I showed in expressing my thoughts. For example, when I read my old poems, I feel proud because they remind me how brave I was.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, "These personal thoughts create a stronger connection" thay vì "This personal thoughts have created". Ngoài ra, câu cuối nên hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn.

Example: I prefer handwriting rather than typing because when you write a poem or a letter by hand, you can better express your emotions and thoughts. These personal touches create a stronger connection with the reader. For example, receiving a handwritten letter often feels more special than a typed one.

× Writing have me express my feelings and creative.

✓ Writing helps me express my feelings and creativity.

The subject 'Writing' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' instead of 'have'. Also, 'creative' is an adjective, but here a noun 'creativity' is needed to complete the meaning.

× I enjoy express myself through poems, especially when there is special occasion.

✓ I enjoy expressing myself through poems, especially when there is a special occasion.

After 'enjoy', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'express' should be 'expressing'. Also, 'special occasion' needs the article 'a' before it.

× write have me show my feelings and.

✓ writing helps me show my feelings.

The phrase 'write have me' is incorrect; it should be 'writing helps me'. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed to be finished properly.

× I have a lot of respectful of my younger self and courage I show in expressing my thoughts.

✓ I have a lot of respect for my younger self and the courage I showed in expressing my thoughts.

'Respectful' is an adjective, but here the noun 'respect' is needed. Also, 'respectful of' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'respect for'. The verb tense 'show' should be past 'showed' to match the past context.

× For example, when I read my old poems, I feel proud because they remind me how brave.

✓ For example, when I read my old poems, I feel proud because they remind me how brave I was.

The sentence is incomplete; it lacks the subject 'I was' after 'how brave' to complete the meaning.

× This personal thoughts have created a stronger connection with the reader.

✓ These personal thoughts have created a stronger connection with the reader.

'Thoughts' is plural, so the determiner should be 'These' instead of 'This'.

× For example, receiving a handwritten letter often feel more special than type 1.

✓ For example, receiving a handwritten letter often feels more special than typing one.

The subject 'receiving a handwritten letter' is singular, so the verb should be 'feels'. Also, 'type 1' is incorrect; it should be 'typing one' to compare the action properly.