Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but it lacks natural flow and has some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of saying "writing sometimes it looks to me it's a bit time wasting," you can say "I find writing a bit time-consuming." Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: I don't write very often, but I enjoy reading newspaper articles. I find writing a bit time-consuming, so I usually prefer reading instead.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand. Try to express your ideas more clearly and directly. Use simple sentences and avoid repetition. Also, explain your reasons with specific details. For example, you can say what kind of things you like to write and why they are important to you.

Example: I don't write often, but when I do, I like to write about my experiences or thoughts that I want to remember in the future.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and repetitive. Try to complete your thoughts and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to explain your ideas clearly. For example, you can say that your writing changes over time because your ideas and experiences change.

Example: Yes, I think the things I write will change over time because my thoughts and experiences develop as I grow.

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is easier and faster for me. Also, typed documents can be saved and accessed anytime, which is very convenient.

× Honestly I don't write a lot but I have a fascination to read newspapers feeds.

✓ Honestly, I don't write a lot but I have a fascination with reading newspaper feeds.

The phrase 'have a fascination to read' is incorrect; the correct form is 'have a fascination with reading' because 'fascination' is followed by 'with' and a gerund (-ing form). Also, 'newspapers feeds' should be 'newspaper feeds' as 'newspaper' acts as an adjective here.

× But writing sometimes it looks to me it's a bit time wasting.

✓ But sometimes writing seems to me a bit time-wasting.

The original sentence has awkward word order and redundancy. 'It looks to me' is better expressed as 'seems to me'. Also, 'time wasting' should be hyphenated as 'time-wasting' when used as an adjective.

× Actually, I don't write a lot and I write something that I can be, I I write those can be, those will be remembered in futures of my present act.

✓ Actually, I don't write a lot and I write things that can be, things that will be remembered in the future because of my present actions.

The sentence is confusing and grammatically incorrect. 'I write something that I can be' is incorrect; it should be 'things that can be'. 'Futures' should be singular 'future'. 'Present act' should be plural 'present actions' for clarity.

× Maybe, but things must be changed in the course of time.

✓ Maybe, but things must change in the course of time.

The phrase 'must be changed' implies passive voice, but here active voice 'must change' is more appropriate to express that things naturally change over time.

× My writing also we we changed because of the, because of the, because of the.

✓ My writing also changes because of various reasons.

The original sentence is incomplete and repetitive. 'We we changed' is incorrect; it should be 'changes' to agree with singular 'writing' in present tense.

× Prefer typing then I prefer typing to writing because typing is very easier for me and then writing on a paper is tiresome work.

✓ I prefer typing to writing because typing is much easier for me, and writing on paper is tiresome work.

The sentence lacks a subject at the beginning. 'Prefer typing then I prefer typing' is redundant; starting with 'I prefer typing' is correct. 'Very easier' is incorrect; 'much easier' is the correct comparative form.

× If I type something in APC then it will be saved for a lifetime and can be retrieved over the period of time, so I prefer.

✓ If I type something on a PC, it will be saved for a lifetime and can be retrieved over time, so I prefer it.

'In APC' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on a PC'. 'Over the period of time' is better expressed as 'over time'. The sentence ends abruptly; adding 'it' clarifies the object of preference.