Writing— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you write a lot?
Candidate
I write a lot because I think it's an activity that can help me focus more and reduce my anxiety. For example, I used to write in a journal.
Examiner
What do you like to write? Why?
Candidate
I love to write fiction books because I love to read it. I think it's a great way in order to learn about words and sentences.
Examiner
Do you think the things you write would change?
Candidate
Yes, all the time, because when I write something, I already know that one week later I will change it because I'm not satisfied with what I wrote.
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Candidate
When I'm writing, I prefer typing because I think it is easier for me and cleaner this way.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
Score: 80.0Suggestion: Votre réponse est claire et naturelle, mais vous pouvez améliorer la cohérence en utilisant des mots de liaison pour connecter vos idées. Par exemple, utilisez "parce que" ou "donc" pour mieux structurer votre réponse.
Example: Yes, I write a lot because it helps me focus and reduces my anxiety. For instance, I used to keep a journal, which allowed me to express my thoughts clearly.
What do you like to write? Why?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: Votre réponse est pertinente mais manque de fluidité et de précision. Essayez d'éviter les répétitions et d'utiliser des expressions plus naturelles en anglais. Par exemple, remplacez "I love to read it" par "I enjoy reading them".
Example: I enjoy writing fiction books because I love reading them. It's a great way to learn new vocabulary and improve my sentence structure.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Score: 78.0Suggestion: Votre réponse est bonne mais un peu redondante. Vous pouvez améliorer la fluidité en utilisant des mots de liaison comme "because" et en évitant de répéter la même idée.
Example: Yes, I often revise my writing because I'm usually not satisfied with the first draft. For example, I know I will change it within a week to improve it.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Score: 82.0Suggestion: Votre réponse est claire mais pourrait être enrichie avec des détails supplémentaires pour être plus complète. Par exemple, expliquez pourquoi c'est plus facile ou plus propre.
Example: I prefer typing when I write because it's faster and my work looks neater. Also, it's easier to edit and organize my ideas on a computer.
Grammar
× I love to write fiction books because I love to read it.
✓ I love to write fiction books because I love to read them.
The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because it refers to a singular noun, but 'fiction books' is plural. The correct pronoun should be 'them' to match the plural noun.
× I think it's a great way in order to learn about words and sentences.
✓ I think it's a great way to learn about words and sentences.
The phrase 'in order to' is redundant when used with 'way'. The correct expression is 'a great way to learn', which is more natural and grammatically correct.
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