WritingPart 1 Report

MockPart12025-07-07 02:33:00

Conversation

Part 1

Examiner

Do you write a lot?

Candidate

Umm, I'm not really good at writing that. I just write down those important things that I want to remember. But overall, I'm not really into writing and it was so boring for me if I write a lot.

Examiner

What do you like to write? Why?

Candidate

I like to write things that I want to accomplish like those to do this to for the I mean for the month or for the for the year that I want to accomplish. But however, if it's writing the story.

Examiner

Do you think the things you write would change?

Candidate

Yes, I mean those dreams are aspirations that I would I am I mean I did wrote as it changed from time to time especially if if it was not achieved. So I need to have this Plan B and I also.

Examiner

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Candidate

I prefer handwriting because I I was get used to writing the things that I want to remember and since we are using nowadays smart mobile phones, I don't want to store it in my cell phone so I write it.

Evaluation

Overall

Overall: 5.5Fluency & Coherence: 5.5Pronunciation: 5.5Grammar: 5.5Lexical Resource: 5.5

Part 1

Do you write a lot?

Score: 60.0

Suggestion: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then add specific reasons or examples. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and keep your sentences concise and natural. For example, you can say, 'I don't write a lot because I find it boring, but I do jot down important things to remember.'

Example: I don't write a lot because I find it boring, but I do jot down important things to remember, like appointments or tasks.

What do you like to write? Why?

Score: 55.0

Suggestion: Make your answer clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then explain with specific details. Avoid hesitations and incomplete sentences. For example, 'I like to write my goals for the month or year because it helps me stay focused.'

Example: I like to write my goals for the month or year because it helps me stay focused and motivated to achieve them.

Do you think the things you write would change?

Score: 50.0

Suggestion: Provide a clear and complete answer with logical flow. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. For example, 'Yes, my written goals change over time, especially if I don't achieve them. Therefore, I create alternative plans.'

Example: Yes, my written goals change over time, especially if I don't achieve them. Therefore, I create alternative plans to stay on track.

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Score: 65.0

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly, then support with reasons. Avoid grammatical errors and redundant phrases. For example, 'I prefer handwriting because I am used to it, and I feel it helps me remember better than typing on my phone.'

Example: I prefer handwriting because I am used to it, and I feel it helps me remember things better than typing on my phone.

Grammar

Verb in the past participle form

× I did wrote as it changed from time to time especially if if it was not achieved.

I did write as it changed from time to time especially if it was not achieved.

The auxiliary verb 'did' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the past tense. 'Did wrote' is incorrect; it should be 'did write'. This is a common error in forming past tense questions or emphatic statements.

Singular and plural issue

× I just write down those important things that I want to remember.

I just write down the important things that I want to remember.

Using 'those' implies specific items previously mentioned, but here 'the important things' is more appropriate to refer generally. Also, 'things' is plural and correctly used, but the article 'the' fits better than 'those' in this context.

Verb in the present participle form

× I was get used to writing the things that I want to remember

I am used to writing the things that I want to remember

The phrase 'was get used to' is incorrect. The correct form is 'am used to' to express a habitual action or preference. 'Used to' is followed by a noun or gerund, so 'writing' is correct here.

Vocabulary

BoringTedious
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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