Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I like love writing" and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: No, I don't write much now because I am busy with work. However, I used to write a lot as a student. I enjoy writing because it helps me express my emotions clearly.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct verb forms and clearer vocabulary. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to explain your preferences.

Example: I enjoy writing my own stories, especially fantasy tales, because I like creating interesting characters and imaginative worlds.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Use correct grammar and complete your thoughts. Use linking words to explain why your writing changes over time.

Example: Yes, I believe my writing will change because as time passes, my experiences and perspectives evolve, which influences the stories I create.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repetition and improve sentence flow with linking words.

Example: I prefer handwriting because using a pen or pencil helps me express my emotions better. Writing on paper feels more personal and meaningful to me.

× No I don't. I used to write a lot when I was a student but now I work and I have not enough time to sit and write.

✓ No, I don't. I used to write a lot when I was a student, but now I work and I do not have enough time to sit and write.

The phrase 'I have not enough time' is incorrect in English. The correct form is 'I do not have enough time' because 'have' is a main verb here and requires the auxiliary 'do' in negative present tense sentences.

× But I always feel comfortable when I write because I like love writing 'cause when I write I put my emotions on the paper and it helps me.

✓ But I always feel comfortable when I write because I love writing 'cause when I write I put my emotions on the paper and it helps me.

The phrase 'I like love writing' is incorrect because 'like' and 'love' are both verbs and cannot be used together without conjunction. The correct form is 'I love writing' to express preference clearly.

× I love writes my own tales, I love fantastic and I find it very lovely when I make some stories about my persons.

✓ I love writing my own tales, I love fantasy and I find it very lovely when I make some stories about my characters.

The verb 'writes' is incorrect after 'I love'; it should be the gerund 'writing'. Also, 'fantastic' is an adjective and should be replaced with the noun 'fantasy' to fit the context. 'Persons' is awkward here; 'characters' is the correct plural noun for people in stories.

× The nature, the people, everything change changes.

✓ The nature, the people, everything changes.

The phrase 'everything change changes' is incorrect. 'Everything' is singular and requires the singular verb 'changes'. The extra word 'change' is redundant and should be removed.

× And my stories should change also. The stories I wrote in the past will be.

✓ And my stories should change also. The stories I wrote in the past will change.

The sentence 'The stories I wrote in the past will be.' is incomplete and lacks a main verb. Adding 'change' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× I prefer handwriting, I love the pen, I love the pencil and I believe when you use the pen you your emotion reflects better.

✓ I prefer handwriting, I love the pen, I love the pencil and I believe when you use the pen your emotions reflect better.

The phrase 'you your emotion reflects better' is incorrect. The pronoun 'your' should directly modify 'emotions' and the verb should agree with the plural noun 'emotions', so 'reflect' is used instead of 'reflects'.

× Paper and pen is the best tool to express your feelings.

✓ Paper and pen are the best tools to express your feelings.

'Paper and pen' is a compound subject and requires the plural verb 'are'. Also, 'tool' should be plural 'tools' to agree with the compound subject.