Writing— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you write a lot?
Candidate
Yes, when I was a high school student, I like writing a lot of I wrote a lot of essays and fictions and some of them even published in Xinjiang website.
Examiner
What do you like to write? Why?
Candidate
Ah, I prefer to write some poems, uh, because I was influenced by many famous poems in Chinese, uh, especially from the 1980s, from two 2000s year, uh, like or someone, uh, I think write poems is a great way to show my attitude and express my.
Examiner
Do you think the things you write would change?
Candidate
Ah yes, as my I mentioned, I prefer to write fictions or poems when I was a high school student, but after coming to university I the habits has changed. I prefer to write some more reality. Some essays are more related.
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Candidate
Of course, handwriting, I think it is a totally different feeling. They handwriting will give you. When I write some essays or fictions by word by word, it's really give you a it is a really peaceful enjoyment.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如时态混用和句子结构不完整。建议注意时态一致性，简洁明了地表达观点，同时避免重复和冗余。
Example: Yes, I wrote a lot when I was in high school. I enjoyed writing essays and short stories, and some of my works were even published on a Xinjiang website.
What do you like to write? Why?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答中有较多语气词和不完整的句子，表达不清晰。建议减少口头语，使用完整句子，并具体说明喜欢写诗的原因。
Example: I prefer writing poems because I was influenced by many famous Chinese poets from the 1980s and 2000s. Writing poems allows me to express my feelings and attitudes creatively.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不连贯。建议使用清晰的句子结构，明确表达写作内容的变化，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Example: Yes, my writing has changed. When I was in high school, I preferred writing fiction and poems, but now at university, I focus more on writing essays about real-life topics.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法和表达不完整的问题，建议使用完整句子，清晰表达手写带来的感受，并避免重复。
Example: I prefer handwriting because it gives me a unique and peaceful feeling. Writing essays or stories by hand allows me to enjoy the process more deeply.
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