Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it would be better to focus more directly on the question about writing rather than reading. Also, avoid redundancy such as repeating 'on my hand' and 'on my phone' without clear contrast. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I write quite often, mostly using my phone because it's convenient and fast. For example, I send text messages and emails daily, which helps me communicate efficiently and stay organized.

Suggestion: Your answer is well-structured and relevant with good vocabulary. To improve, you could add linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and provide a bit more specific detail about your thesis topic or research area.

Example: I enjoy writing a thesis because it lets me conduct in-depth research in my field. Moreover, this work helps advance my career and contributes to improving education in Japan, which I find very rewarding.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar issues and lacks clear linking between ideas. Try to use correct verb forms and linking words like 'because' or 'so that' to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Example: Yes, I think what I write will change because I am just starting my research journey. In the future, I want to write different theses that contribute to society so that my work becomes more meaningful and useful to others.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and well-organized with good use of linking words. To improve, avoid repeating words like 'when' and try to complete your example sentence fully for better clarity.

Example: I prefer typing when I write because it is faster, more efficient, and easier to correct mistakes. Moreover, typed text is clearer and more legible, which helps the reader understand better. For example, when I type emails or reports, I can quickly fix errors and format the text neatly.

× I enjoy writing a thesis because it allows me to conduct in depth research and obtain meaningful results related to my field of study.

✓ I enjoy writing a thesis because it allows me to conduct in-depth research and obtain meaningful results related to my field of study.

The phrase 'in depth' should be hyphenated as 'in-depth' when used as an adjective before a noun. This is a common adjective formation rule in English to clarify meaning and improve readability.

× I believe the things I would I write will change as I'm just beginning my research journey in the future, I want to write different thesis that can contribute to society and make a positive impact.

✓ I believe the things I write will change as I'm just beginning my research journey. In the future, I want to write different theses that can contribute to society and make a positive impact.

The original sentence contains a repeated word 'I' and is a run-on sentence combining two independent clauses improperly. Also, 'thesis' should be plural 'theses' when referring to multiple works. Splitting into two sentences and correcting plural form improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× In the future, I want to write different thesis that can contribute to society and make a positive impact.

✓ In the future, I want to write different theses that can contribute to society and make a positive impact.

The word 'thesis' is singular; when referring to multiple works, the plural form 'theses' should be used. Using the correct plural form ensures subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× For example, when I type emails or reports, I can quickly correct errors and format.

✓ For example, when I type emails or reports, I can quickly correct errors and format them.

The verb 'format' requires an object to complete the meaning. Adding 'them' clarifies that the emails or reports are being formatted. This correction addresses the incomplete verb usage in the sentence.