Writing— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you write a lot?
Candidate
There I do watch it quite a lot, especially for me, my students and work. A white thing help me help me, often writing my report and sometimes even thoughts.
Examiner
What do you like to write? Why?
Candidate
Is the bracket student in vocabulary and.
Examiner
Do you think the things you write would change?
Candidate
That is made a very bad.
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Candidate
That, that, that.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
Score: 20.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, đồng thời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp.
Example: Yes, I write quite often, mainly for my work and to help my students. I usually write reports and sometimes jot down my thoughts in a notebook.
What do you like to write? Why?
Score: 10.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và không trả lời đúng câu hỏi. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích lý do hoặc đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý.
Example: I like to write essays and stories because they help me improve my vocabulary and express my ideas clearly.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Score: 5.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời không có ý nghĩa rõ ràng và không trả lời đúng câu hỏi. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích quan điểm của mình và sử dụng các từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Example: Yes, I think the things I write will change as I gain more experience and learn new things.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Score: 0.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời không có nội dung và không trả lời câu hỏi. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, nêu rõ sở thích của mình và giải thích lý do để câu trả lời có ý nghĩa và đầy đủ.
Example: I prefer typing because it is faster and easier to edit my work on a computer.
Grammar
× There I do watch it quite a lot, especially for me, my students and work. A white thing help me help me, often writing my report and sometimes even thoughts.
✓ I do watch it quite a lot, especially for myself, my students, and work. A white thing helps me, often helping me write my report and sometimes even my thoughts.
The original sentence misuses pronouns such as 'There' and repeats 'help me' unnecessarily. 'There' is not appropriate here; 'I' is the correct subject pronoun. Also, 'help me help me' is redundant and confusing. The phrase 'especially for me' should be 'especially for myself' to correctly reflect the reflexive pronoun. Additionally, 'A white thing' is unclear but assumed to be a tool that 'helps' (third person singular verb) the speaker. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and grammatical correctness.
× Is the bracket student in vocabulary and.
✓ It is about students' vocabulary.
The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Is the bracket student in vocabulary and' lacks a verb and proper structure. The correction provides a complete sentence with a subject and verb, clarifying the intended meaning. The phrase 'bracket student' is unclear, so it is interpreted as 'students' vocabulary' to make sense in context.
× That is made a very bad.
✓ That has made it very bad.
The original sentence has incorrect word order and verb form. 'That is made a very bad' is ungrammatical. The correction uses the present perfect tense 'has made' to indicate an effect on the present, and adds the pronoun 'it' to complete the sentence. The adjective 'bad' is used correctly here to describe the result.
× That, that, that.
✓ I prefer typing when I am writing.
The original sentence is incomplete and does not answer the question. The correction provides a complete and relevant answer to the question about preference between typing and handwriting. It uses the present tense 'prefer' and the present continuous 'am writing' appropriately.
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