Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is very short and lacks detail. Try to provide a more natural and effective response by explaining what kind of writing you do or why you write a lot. This will make your answer more engaging and complete.

Example: Yes, I write a lot, especially journals and essays, because I enjoy expressing my thoughts and improving my writing skills.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words and more specific details. For example, explain why writing stories, poems, or songs interests you and how it affects you.

Example: I like to write stories, poems, and sometimes songs because they allow me to express my creativity and emotions, which helps me stay focused and interested in what I am doing.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words to explain how and why your writing changes.

Example: Yes, I believe the things I write change over time because my ideas and feelings evolve. For instance, my mood often influences the style and content of my writing.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but slightly repetitive. You can improve it by combining sentences and adding more specific reasons or examples to make it more natural and effective.

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and neater, especially since my handwriting is quite messy, which makes typing more convenient for me.

× I like to write stories and poems and sometimes songs because writing makes me get interested in a particular task.

✓ I like to write stories, poems, and sometimes songs because writing makes me interested in a particular task.

The phrase 'makes me get interested' is incorrect. The verb 'make' followed by an object is usually followed by the base form of the verb or an adjective. Here, 'makes me interested' is correct because 'interested' is an adjective describing the subject's feeling. Using 'get interested' is unnecessary and awkward in this context.

× Yes, I think I write things for change, and I write things because I want them to be changed regularly and I think it will change according to my mood.

✓ Yes, I think I write things for change, and I write things because I want them to change regularly, and I think they will change according to my mood.

The phrase 'want them to be changed' is passive and less natural here. Since the subject wants the things themselves to change, the active form 'want them to change' is more appropriate. Also, 'it will change' is unclear; 'they will change' correctly refers to 'things' which is plural.