Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct vocabulary. For example, instead of 'ride along', you might say 'write regularly'. Also, avoid mixing ideas without proper linking. Keep your answer concise and coherent.

Example: Yes, I write regularly because I find it fascinating to record my daily activities. I usually keep diaries and journals to help me track my routine. Writing allows me to express feelings that are hard to say aloud.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words and correcting grammar. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words like 'for example' or 'because'.

Example: I like to write poems and record my daily experiences. For example, I keep a diary regularly because it helps me feel comfortable and express my emotions clearly.

Suggestion: Your answer is vague and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a direct answer with specific examples and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases.

Example: Yes, I believe the topics I write about will change over time. For instance, I might write more about new technologies and how they affect our daily lives because these things keep evolving.

Suggestion: Your answer needs clearer structure and better grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your reasons using linking words. Also, clarify what you mean by 'preference about our privacies'.

Example: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal. However, sometimes I have to type, especially when privacy is important or when I need to write quickly.

× Yes, I love to ride along because it's very fascinating to write throughout the day activities and I also write Diaries and journals and it's look after my daily routine and I love to write because it's a feeling which we can't express but right makes it easy to.

✓ Yes, I love to write along because it's very fascinating to write about the day's activities and I also write diaries and journals and it looks after my daily routine and I love to write because it's a feeling which we can't express but writing makes it easy to.

The phrase 'ride along' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'write along' to match the intended meaning. 'It's look after' is incorrect; the verb should be 'looks' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Right makes it easy to' is incorrect; it should be 'writing makes it easy to' because 'writing' is the gerund form acting as the subject here.

× Yes, I love to ride along because it's very fascinating to write throughout the day activities and I also write Diaries and journals and it's look after my daily routine and I love to write because it's a feeling which we can't express but right makes it easy to.

✓ Yes, I love to write along because it's very fascinating to write about the day's activities and I also write diaries and journals and it looks after my daily routine and I love to write because it's a feeling which we can't express but writing makes it easy to.

The phrase 'throughout the day activities' is awkward; it should be 'about the day's activities' to correctly describe the activities during the day. Also, 'Diaries' should not be capitalized unless it is a proper noun.

× Sometimes I love to write some poems and my experience throughout the day but in on the regular basis I love to write diary and journal throughout my daily activities and daily experience.

✓ Sometimes I love to write some poems and about my experiences throughout the day but on a regular basis I love to write a diary and journal about my daily activities and experiences.

The phrase 'my experience throughout the day' should be 'about my experiences throughout the day' to correctly express the object of writing. 'In on the regular basis' is incorrect; it should be 'on a regular basis'. 'Write diary and journal' should be 'write a diary and journal' to include the article 'a' for singular countable nouns. Also, 'daily experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match the context.

× Sometimes I love to write some poems and my experience throughout the day but in on the regular basis I love to write diary and journal throughout my daily activities and daily experience. It makes me feel very comfortable and it's a great way to express our feeling and emotions and.

✓ Sometimes I love to write some poems and about my experiences throughout the day but on a regular basis I love to write a diary and journal about my daily activities and experiences. It makes me feel very comfortable and it's a great way to express my feelings and emotions.

The pronoun 'our' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring to their own feelings; it should be 'my feelings and emotions'. Also, 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match 'emotions'.

× Yes and definitely there are several things which I write would change like it might be about the technologies along with their purposes and uses.

✓ Yes, and definitely there are several things I write that would change, like it might be about technologies along with their purposes and uses.

The phrase 'which I write would change' is awkward; it should be 'I write that would change' to correctly connect the relative clause. Also, 'the technologies' is incorrect here; 'technologies' without 'the' is more appropriate when speaking generally.

× Yes and definitely there are several things which I write would change like it might be about the technologies along with their purposes and uses. Although there are so many things surrounding our daily purpose life.

✓ Yes, and definitely there are several things I write that would change, like it might be about technologies along with their purposes and uses. Although there are so many things surrounding our daily purposeful life.

The phrase 'daily purpose life' is incorrect; it should be 'daily purposeful life' to use the correct adjective form. Also, the sentence 'Although there are so many things surrounding our daily purposeful life.' is incomplete and should be connected properly, but as per instructions, only grammar mistakes from the list are corrected.

× Definitely my preference goes for handwriting, but there are several occasions where we can't make it possible.

✓ Definitely, my preference is for handwriting, but there are several occasions when we can't make it possible.

The phrase 'preference goes for' is incorrect; it should be 'preference is for'. Also, 'where' should be 'when' to refer to occasions or times.

× So I'll go for typing because there are some preference about our privacies, that's why.

✓ So I'll go for typing because there is some preference for our privacy, that's why.

'There are some preference' is incorrect; 'preference' is uncountable and singular, so it should be 'there is some preference'. 'About our privacies' is incorrect; 'privacy' is uncountable and singular, so it should be 'for our privacy'.