Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，比如“I'm walking a bank”应为“I work at a bank”。建议注意动词时态和词汇的准确使用，使表达更自然。

Example: I work at a bank now, so I don't have to do a lot of writing in my daily work.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误，如“write direct”应为“write directly”或“write honestly”，以及“show me”应为“shows me”。建议注意主谓一致和词汇搭配，表达更准确。

Example: I like to write honestly because it allows me to express my thoughts and emotions. Also, looking back at my previous writing shows me how much I have improved.

Suggestion: 回答较好，但“creating writing”表达不准确，建议使用“creative writing”。同时可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Example: For sure, since I have little experience, my writing style will probably change. For example, I might start writing more academic articles or even try my hand at creative writing.

Suggestion: 回答内容清晰，但有语法错误，如“help me remember”应为“helps me remember”，建议注意主谓一致。可以增加连接词使表达更流畅。

Example: It depends on what I need to write. For assignments, I prefer typing because it is faster, but for taking notes, I like handwriting better since it feels more personal and helps me remember things.

× Well, you know, I'm walking a bank now so I don't have to do a lot of writing in my daily work.

✓ Well, you know, I'm working at a bank now so I don't have to do a lot of writing in my daily work.

这里的错误是动词形式错误，'walking' 应该是 'working'。'Walking' 是动词 'walk' 的现在分词，表示走路，而句子想表达的是“我现在在银行工作”，应使用 'work' 的现在进行时 'working'。

× Well, you know, I'm walking a bank now so I don't have to do a lot of writing in my daily work.

✓ Well, you know, I'm working at a bank now so I don't have to do a lot of writing in my daily work.

介词使用错误，'walking a bank' 中缺少介词，应为 'working at a bank'，表示“在银行工作”。

× I like to write direct because it allows me to express my thought and emotions.

✓ I like to write directly because it allows me to express my thoughts and emotions.

副词和名词复数形式错误。'direct' 应改为副词 'directly'，修饰动词 'write'。'thought' 应为复数 'thoughts'，因为表达的是多种想法。

× I like to write direct because it allows me to express my thought and emotions.

✓ I like to write directly because it allows me to express my thoughts and emotions.

名词单复数错误，'thought' 应为复数 'thoughts'，因为通常表达多种想法。

× Plus looking back at my previous writing show me how much I have groomed, which is pretty good.

✓ Plus, looking back at my previous writing shows me how much I have improved, which is pretty good.

动词形式错误，'show' 应为第三人称单数 'shows'，因为主语是 'looking back at my previous writing'，是单数。'groomed' 用词不当，应改为 'improved'，表示“进步”。

× Plus looking back at my previous writing show me how much I have groomed, which is pretty good.

✓ Plus, looking back at my previous writing shows me how much I have improved, which is pretty good.

主谓一致错误，主语是单数，谓语动词应加 's'，即 'shows'。

× For sure, as I have no experience, my writing style will probably shift.

✓ For sure, as I have no experience, my writing style will probably shift.

此句无时态错误，符合上下文时态要求。

× Maybe I'll start writing more academic stuff or even try my hand at creating writing.

✓ Maybe I'll start writing more academic stuff or even try my hand at creative writing.

形容词使用错误，'creating writing' 应为 'creative writing'，表示“创意写作”。

× For assignment I prefer typing because it is faster, but for taking notes I like handwriting better.

✓ For an assignment I prefer typing because it is faster, but for taking notes I like handwriting better.

冠词错误，'assignment' 前应加不定冠词 'an'，表示泛指某个作业。

× It feels more personal and help me remember things.

✓ It feels more personal and helps me remember things.

主谓一致错误，主语是 'It'，第三人称单数，谓语动词应加 's'，即 'helps'。