WritingPart 1 Report

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Part 1

Examiner

Do you write a lot?

Candidate

Yes, I write cute often because it helps me remember some important information. For example, I usually take notes during the class and also take some short memories after reading books. Writing is a useful habit.

Examiner

What do you like to write? Why?

Candidate

I like to practice my handwriting in my free time because it can build my confidence and make my typeface look more pretty and I write long sentence slowly and carefully. This can make my handwriting more beautiful and more confident.

Examiner

Do you think the things you write would change?

Candidate

Yes, I believe my handwriting has changed a lot of time. When I was in primary school, my writing was quite mad and hard to read. However, when I was in junior high school, I tried to write more neatly and practice regularly to improve it.

Examiner

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Candidate

I prefer to handwriting because I like to practice my typeface and this makes me more confident about it because it has many cultures on on it and and it can start me more.

Evaluation

Overall

Overall: 6.0Fluency & Coherence: 6.0Pronunciation: 6.0Grammar: 5.5Lexical Resource: 6.0

Part 1

Do you write a lot?

Score: 65.0

Suggestion: 回答中存在拼写错误("cute"应为"quite"),影响表达的自然性和准确性。建议注意拼写和用词准确,避免影响理解。同时,回答可以更简洁,避免重复表达。

Example: Yes, I write quite often because it helps me remember important information. For example, I usually take notes during class and jot down brief summaries after reading books. Writing is a useful habit for me.

What do you like to write? Why?

Score: 60.0

Suggestion: 回答中语法和表达不够准确,如"typeface"用词不当,应使用"handwriting"。句子较长且缺少连贯的连接词,建议简化句子结构并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Example: I like to practice my handwriting in my free time because it helps build my confidence. I write long sentences slowly and carefully, which makes my handwriting neater and more attractive.

Do you think the things you write would change?

Score: 70.0

Suggestion: 回答内容较好,但"mad"用词不当,应使用"messy"或"untidy"。建议使用更准确的词汇,并适当使用连接词增强逻辑性。

Example: Yes, I believe my handwriting has changed a lot over time. When I was in primary school, my writing was quite messy and hard to read. However, in junior high school, I practiced regularly to write more neatly and improve it.

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Score: 50.0

Suggestion: 回答中存在多处语法错误和重复词汇,表达不清晰。"typeface"用词不当,应为"handwriting"。建议简化句子,避免重复,使用准确词汇,并清晰表达观点。

Example: I prefer handwriting because it allows me to practice and improve my handwriting style. I feel more confident when I write by hand, as it reflects cultural aspects and personal expression.

Grammar

Present tense issue

× Yes, I write cute often because it helps me remember some important information.

Yes, I write quite often because it helps me remember some important information.

句中单词“cute”应为“quite”,这是拼写错误,导致句子意思不明确。应使用“quite”表示“相当,经常”。

Singular and plural issue

× I usually take notes during the class and also take some short memories after reading books.

I usually take notes during class and also take some short memos after reading books.

“the class”中的“the”不必要,通常说“during class”。“short memories”用词不当,应为“short memos”或“short notes”,表示简短的笔记。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I like to practice my handwriting in my free time because it can build my confidence and make my typeface look more pretty and I write long sentence slowly and carefully.

I like to practice my handwriting in my free time because it can build my confidence and make my typeface look prettier, and I write long sentences slowly and carefully.

“more pretty”应改为比较级“prettier”。“long sentence”应为复数“long sentences”。“slowly”作为副词修饰动词“write”,位置正确。

Singular and plural issue

× I write long sentence slowly and carefully.

I write long sentences slowly and carefully.

“sentence”应为复数形式“sentences”,因为通常指多句。

Singular and plural issue

× I believe my handwriting has changed a lot of time.

I believe my handwriting has changed many times.

“a lot of time”用法不当,表示“很多次”应使用“many times”。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× my writing was quite mad and hard to read.

my writing was quite bad and hard to read.

“mad”意为“疯狂的”,此处应使用形容词“bad”表示“差的”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer to handwriting because I like to practice my typeface and this makes me more confident about it because it has many cultures on on it and and it can start me more.

I prefer handwriting because I like to practice my typeface and this makes me more confident about it because it has a lot of culture in it and it can inspire me more.

“prefer to handwriting”应为“prefer handwriting”,动词“prefer”后直接接动名词。重复“on on”和“and and”应删除。“many cultures on on it”表达不当,应为“a lot of culture in it”。“start me more”表达错误,应为“inspire me more”。

Vocabulary

BeautifulAttractive
FreeWithout charge; Unencumbered by; Vacant; Independent; On the loose
HardFirm; Arduous; Difficult; Harsh; Strict
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
LongLengthy; Soon; Yearn for
MadInsane; Angry; Foolish; Frenzied
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
PrettyAttractive; Quite; Beautify
ShortConcise; Brief; Scarce; Briefly
UsefulFunctional; Beneficial
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