Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then support it with clear reasons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' properly, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your sentences concise and natural.

Example: I don't write much these days because technology allows me to take notes on my smartphone. For example, I use apps to quickly jot down important information instead of writing by hand.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but needs better structure and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words like 'because' and 'for example'. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences.

Example: I like to write my daily schedule and important appointments either on my mobile phone or in a notebook because I don't want to forget them. For example, I note down meetings and deadlines to stay organized.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contradictory. Be clear and consistent in your opinion. Use simple sentences and linking words like 'because' to explain your reasons. Avoid repeating the same ideas.

Example: I don't think the things I write will change in the future because writing helps me stay organized and alert. For instance, I always write important tasks to remind myself.

Suggestion: Your answer does not address the question properly and repeats previous content. Make sure to answer the question directly, stating your preference clearly, and support it with reasons and examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Example: I prefer handwriting when I write because it helps me remember information better. For example, writing notes by hand makes it easier for me to focus and recall later.

× Oh, to be honest this in this technology era, we do not prefer to write a lot because we have a few opportunities as well as few things which we note on smart phone.

✓ Oh, to be honest, in this technology era, we do not prefer to write a lot because we have few opportunities as well as few things which we note on smartphones.

The phrase 'this in this technology era' is incorrect; it should be 'in this technology era' to correctly use the preposition 'in' to indicate the time period. Also, 'smart phone' should be pluralized as 'smartphones' to refer generally to such devices.

× For example, there is up for like nodes we can make a note on there.

✓ For example, there are apps like Notes where we can make a note.

The phrase 'there is up for like nodes' is incorrect. 'There is' should be 'there are' to agree with the plural noun 'apps'. Also, 'nodes' is likely a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'Notes', which is a proper noun for an app. The sentence is corrected for clarity and plural agreement.

× Well, there are ample of things which I prefer to write on my mobile phone or on a notebook.

✓ Well, there are ample things which I prefer to write on my mobile phone or on a notebook.

The phrase 'ample of things' is incorrect; 'ample' is used without 'of' when referring to quantity. The correct phrase is 'ample things'.

× Becaused first of all I preferred to write my important things like my daily schedule and uh.

✓ Because first of all I prefer to write my important things like my daily schedule and uh.

The word 'Becaused' is incorrect; it should be 'Because'. Also, 'preferred' is past tense but the context is present habit, so it should be 'prefer' in present tense.

× So I prefer this because I never want to miss them, so that's why.

✓ So I prefer this because I never want to miss them; that's why.

The sentence is mostly correct but the phrase 'so that's why' is redundant after 'because'. Using a semicolon or separating the ideas improves clarity.

× Well, I don't think so. In future these things would be changed because this is my habit to write because I always keep my things very clear and the things which are right it gives me alertness and remind me on my crucial thing.

✓ Well, I don't think so. In the future, these things will not change because it is my habit to write; I always keep my things very clear and the things which I write give me alertness and remind me of my crucial things.

'In future' should be 'in the future'. 'Would be changed' is incorrect; the correct future tense is 'will not change'. 'The things which are right' should be 'the things which I write'. 'Remind me on' should be 'remind me of'. These corrections fix future tense, prepositions, and clarity.

× So it would never change in future.

✓ So it will never change in the future.

'In future' should be 'in the future' to correctly use the definite article with the noun 'future'. Also, 'would' is replaced with 'will' to express certainty about the future.