Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在错误，且内容重复。建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，并且回答时注意逻辑连贯性。

Example: No, I don't write a lot nowadays because I am usually busy after work. However, if I have free time, I would like to develop the habit of writing more often.

Suggestion: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多，且用词不准确。建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并且注意单词拼写和语法。

Example: I like to write diaries when I have free time because it helps me express my feelings and record interesting events. It also brings me happiness when I look back at them.

Suggestion: 回答内容不够具体，语法和词汇错误较多。建议明确表达观点，使用正确的时态和词汇，并提供具体理由。

Example: No, I don't think what I write will change because they are records of past events. Once something has happened, it cannot be changed.

Suggestion: 回答中有很多拼写和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议使用简单句子表达观点，注意单词拼写和语法，保持回答连贯。

Example: In the past, I preferred handwriting because I didn't have many devices. It felt peaceful and relaxing. But now, I prefer typing because it saves time and is more convenient.

× No, it is uncommon for me to write a lot nowadays because of lack in time.

✓ No, it is uncommon for me to write a lot nowadays because of lack of time.

这里的介词应该是“lack of”，表示“缺乏……”，而不是“lack in”。

× I am off duty at the clock in most of the time so I don't have time to.

✓ I am off duty at the clock most of the time, so I don't have time to.

“at the clock in”结构不正确，应去掉“in”，并且句子中断句不完整，需加逗号连接。

× Do some writing.

✓ Do some writing.

这句话是片段，缺少主语，建议与前句合并或补充主语。

× Sometimes if I go some available time, I will definitely pick up this habit and do some reading.

✓ Sometimes if I get some available time, I will definitely pick up this habit and do some reading.

“go some available time”表达不正确，应为“get some available time”，表示“得到一些空闲时间”。

× I'm a person who like to express myself, but when I get out of my my duty, I have no one to talk with.

✓ I'm a person who likes to express myself, but when I get out of my duty, I have no one to talk with.

关系代词who指代单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“likes”。

× Bad to write some dairy to elaborate the interesting things during the day.

✓ I write some diary to elaborate the interesting things during the day.

“Bad to write”表达不正确，应为“I write”；“dairy”应为“diary”，表示日记。

× No, I don't think the thing I'm writing were changed as most of them are gossip and rifles.

✓ No, I don't think the things I'm writing have changed as most of them are gossip and rumors.

“thing”应为复数“things”；“were changed”时态和语态不合适，应为现在完成时“have changed”；“rifles”应为“rumors”，表示“谣言”。

× They are happen in the past.

✓ They happened in the past.

“are happen”结构错误，应使用过去式“happened”表示过去发生的事情。

× In the past, I preferred to Redmond area by my hand because of the limitation of devices.

✓ In the past, I preferred to write by hand because of the limitation of devices.

“Redmond area”无意义，应为“write”；“by my hand”应为“by hand”。

× I felt very peaceful and relaxing where I dropped my daring.

✓ I felt very peaceful and relaxed when I wrote my diary.

“relaxing”应为形容词“relaxed”描述感受；“dropped my daring”错误，应为“wrote my diary”，表示写日记。

× But now? I would like to type my dairy instead of writing them by hand.

✓ But now, I would like to type my diary instead of writing it by hand.

“dairy”应为“diary”；“them”指代不明确，日记应为单数“it”。

× It is a good method to help me save time and get a need page.

✓ It is a good method to help me save time and get a neat page.

“need page”无意义，应为“neat page”，表示整洁的页面。