Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Tu respuesta debe ser más clara y organizada. Evita errores gramaticales y usa oraciones completas y coherentes. Por ejemplo, menciona directamente que escribes en ambos idiomas y explica brevemente cuándo y por qué lo haces, usando conectores para mejorar la fluidez.

Example: Yes, I write a lot in both Spanish and English. I practice English writing frequently at work because I teach English lessons to my coworkers. Additionally, I write in Spanish when I send WhatsApp messages to my parents.

Suggestion: Tu respuesta debe ser más clara y evitar errores. Explica qué tipo de escritos prefieres y por qué, usando conectores para unir ideas y detalles específicos para enriquecer la respuesta.

Example: I like to write daily tasks in my journal to stay organized. Also, I keep a special journal where I write about my feelings at the end of each day because it helps me relax and reflect.

Suggestion: Tu respuesta es buena pero puede mejorar con una estructura más clara y vocabulario más preciso. Usa conectores para explicar mejor el cambio en tus escritos y da ejemplos específicos.

Example: Yes, I believe the things I write will change over time because people grow and change. For example, as a child, I used to look forward to wearing high heels, but now I don't think about that anymore.

Suggestion: Tu respuesta es buena pero puede ser más clara y organizada. Usa conectores para unir ideas y corrige errores gramaticales para que sea más natural y efectiva.

Example: I definitely prefer handwriting because I grew up writing with my grandparents at school. It has become one of my favorite daily activities. Despite the benefits of technology, handwriting gives me a special feeling of freedom.

× Yes I do, Writing in Spanish as my native language and in English as a foreign language is a skill direct practice very frequently at my coworker I teach English lessons.

✓ Yes I do. Writing in Spanish as my native language and in English as a foreign language is a skill I practice very frequently at my workplace where I teach English lessons.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Writing' at the beginning without proper structure and lacks necessary connectors. Also, 'direct practice' is incorrect; it should be 'I practice'. The sentence is corrected to use the present participle 'Writing' properly as a gerund subject and to clarify the meaning with correct verb usage and sentence structure.

× I practice English there and I cried in Spanish when I'm sending an WhatsApp messages to my parents.

✓ I practice English there and I write in Spanish when I'm sending WhatsApp messages to my parents.

The verb 'cried' is incorrectly used instead of 'write'. Also, 'an WhatsApp messages' is incorrect; it should be 'WhatsApp messages' without 'an'. The sentence is corrected to use the correct verb 'write' and proper article usage.

× Sometimes I like to write on my journey the task that I need to be done during the day, but I also have a special journey where I cried how I feel that day which brings me come.

✓ Sometimes I like to write in my journal the tasks that I need to get done during the day, but I also have a special journal where I write how I feel that day which brings me comfort.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect; it should be 'in' when referring to writing in a journal. 'Journey' is a wrong word; it should be 'journal'. 'Cried' is incorrect; it should be 'write'. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks'. 'Brings me come' is incorrect; it should be 'brings me comfort'. The sentence is corrected for proper preposition use, word choice, and verb usage.

× Oh yes, I think so. As humans we are constantly evolving. For example, when I was a child, I look forward to use high heels, which is. Something that today I wouldn't think about that.

✓ Oh yes, I think so. As humans, we are constantly evolving. For example, when I was a child, I looked forward to using high heels, which is something that today I wouldn't think about.

The verb 'look' should be in past tense 'looked' to match 'when I was a child'. 'Use' should be 'using' after 'looked forward to'. The sentence is corrected to maintain tense consistency and correct verb form after the phrase 'look forward to'.

× Oh I prefer handwriting, definitely when I grew up handwriting at the school with my grandpas.

✓ Oh I prefer handwriting, definitely since I grew up writing by hand at school with my grandpas.

The phrase 'when I grew up handwriting' is incorrect. It should be 'since I grew up writing by hand'. Also, 'at the school' should be 'at school' or just 'school'. The sentence is corrected for proper verb form and preposition use.