WritingPart 1 Report

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Part 1

Examiner

Do you write a lot?

Candidate

Do you lie a lot?

Examiner

What do you like to write? Why?

Candidate

What do you like to ride? Why?

Examiner

Do you think the things you write would change?

Candidate

Do you sing that thing you write watching?

Examiner

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Candidate

Do you prefer typing or head or hand writing when you are writing?

Evaluation

Overall

Overall: 5.0Fluency & Coherence: 5.0Pronunciation: 5.0Grammar: 5.0Lexical Resource: 5.0

Part 1

Do you write a lot?

Score: 10.0

Suggestion: សូមប្រុងប្រយ័ត្នក្នុងការស្តាប់និងឆ្លើយសំណួរដោយត្រឹមត្រូវ។ ការឆ្លើយសំណួរដោយមិនទាក់ទងនឹងសំណួរដើមធ្វើឲ្យការប្រាស្រ័យទាក់ទងមិនច្បាស់។

Example: Yes, I write quite often, especially for school assignments and personal journals.

What do you like to write? Why?

Score: 10.0

Suggestion: សូមយកចិត្តទុកដាក់ក្នុងការឆ្លើយសំណួរដោយផ្តោតលើប្រធានបទដែលបានសួរ។ ការឆ្លើយសំណួរដោយផ្លាស់ប្តូរប្រធានបទធ្វើឲ្យការប្រាស្រ័យទាក់ទងមិនមានប្រសិទ្ធភាព។

Example: I like to write stories because it allows me to express my creativity and share my ideas.

Do you think the things you write would change?

Score: 5.0

Suggestion: សូមប្រុងប្រយ័ត្នក្នុងការប្រើពាក្យនិងរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធប្រយោគឲ្យត្រឹមត្រូវ។ ការប្រើពាក្យមិនត្រឹមត្រូវធ្វើឲ្យមិនអាចយល់បាននូវអត្ថន័យ។

Example: Yes, I think the things I write may change over time as my thoughts and experiences evolve.

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Score: 20.0

Suggestion: សូមប្រុងប្រយ័ត្នក្នុងការប្រើពាក្យឲ្យត្រឹមត្រូវ និងច្បាស់លាស់។ ការប្រើពាក្យមិនត្រឹមត្រូវធ្វើឲ្យការប្រាស្រ័យទាក់ទងមិនច្បាស់។

Example: I prefer typing because it is faster and easier to edit my work on a computer.

Grammar

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Do you lie a lot?

Do you write a lot?

The student misheard or misused the verb 'write' as 'lie', which changes the meaning entirely. The correct verb should match the examiner's question to maintain coherence.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× What do you like to ride? Why?

What do you like to write? Why?

The student replaced 'write' with 'ride', which is incorrect in this context. The question is about writing preferences, so the verb should be 'write'.

Sentence structure errors

× Do you sing that thing you write watching?

Do you think the things you write will change?

The student's sentence is ungrammatical and does not make sense. The examiner's original question is about whether the things written would change, so the correction restores the intended meaning and proper sentence structure.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Do you prefer typing or head or hand writing when you are writing?

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

The student incorrectly inserted 'head' and separated 'handwriting' into 'hand writing'. The correct phrase is 'handwriting' as one word, and 'head' is irrelevant here.

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