Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. Try to be more precise and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of saying "what whatever happened in a day," say "what happened during the day." Also, avoid confusing phrases like "that make me leave." Keep your sentences clear and concise.

Example: Yes, I write every day in my diary. Each night, I record the events and my thoughts from the day. Writing helps me reflect and relax before sleeping.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by correcting grammar and adding linking words for coherence. For example, say "I have a habit of writing in my diary every day. Actually, I started this when I was 17 years old because I prefer expressing my feelings through writing rather than talking to others, as I have some trust issues."

Example: I like to write in my diary every day. I started this habit when I was 17 because I find it easier to express my feelings through writing rather than speaking, especially since I have some trust issues.

Suggestion: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to structure your answer clearly with linking words. For example, "Yes, I think what I write will change in the future. Currently, I only write about what happened each day, but later, I might include my plans for the next day."

Example: Yes, I believe my writing will change over time. At the moment, I just record daily events, but in the future, I plan to add my thoughts and plans for the coming days.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive. Try to combine your ideas into one concise sentence and add a reason. For example, "I prefer handwriting because I have neat handwriting and find it more personal than typing."

Example: I prefer handwriting because I have neat handwriting, and writing by hand feels more personal and enjoyable than typing.

× I have a short diary.

✓ I have a small diary.

The word 'short' is not typically used to describe a diary. 'Small' is more appropriate to describe the size of a diary. This is an incorrect use of adjectives, but since 'short' can be ambiguous, changing it to 'small' clarifies the meaning.

× Every night I write what whatever happened in a day.

✓ Every night I write about whatever happened during the day.

The original sentence has redundant words ('what whatever') and incorrect preposition usage ('in a day'). The correction removes redundancy and uses the correct preposition 'during' to indicate time.

× So I write every day that that make me leave.

✓ So I write every day; that makes me feel alive.

The original sentence is unclear and contains grammatical errors. 'That that make me leave' is incorrect. The correction assumes the intended meaning is 'that makes me feel alive' and corrects subject-verb agreement and sentence structure.

× Well, I have a habit of writing diary every day.

✓ Well, I have a habit of writing a diary every day.

The noun 'diary' is countable and requires an article 'a' when singular. The original sentence omits the article, which is incorrect.

× Actually, when I was 17 year old, that time I started expressing my feelings through writing instead of telling my story to somebody because I have some kind of trust issues.

✓ Actually, when I was 17 years old, I started expressing my feelings through writing instead of telling my story to somebody because I had some kind of trust issues.

The phrase '17 year old' should be '17 years old' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'that time' is unnecessary and removed for clarity. The verb 'have' should be in past tense 'had' to match the past time frame.

× For sure it will change in future as right now I'm just writing what it what happened every day, but maybe I will add up and a ride what I will do next day.

✓ For sure, it will change in the future as right now I'm just writing about what happened every day, but maybe I will add and write what I will do the next day.

The phrase 'in future' should be 'in the future' (article usage). 'What it what happened' is redundant and incorrect; corrected to 'about what happened'. 'Add up and a ride' is incorrect; corrected to 'add and write'. 'Next day' should be 'the next day' for correct article usage.

× For sure it will change in future as right now I'm just writing what it what happened every day, but maybe I will add up and a ride what I will do next day.

✓ For sure, it will change in the future as right now I'm just writing about what happened every day, but maybe I will add and write what I will do the next day.

The preposition 'in' requires the definite article 'the' before 'future'. Also, 'writing what it what happened' should be 'writing about what happened' to use the correct preposition 'about'.

× Actually I have a good handwriting, so I prefer my handwriting.

✓ Actually, I have good handwriting, so I prefer writing by hand.

'Handwriting' is an uncountable noun and does not require an article 'a'. Also, repeating 'handwriting' is redundant; rephrased to 'prefer writing by hand' for clarity and naturalness.