Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences more concise and grammatically correct, for example, avoid repeating words and ensure subject-verb agreement. Also, use linking words to improve flow.

Example: To be honest, I don't write much because I usually use a note-taking app on my phone to jot down things quickly.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: I usually write grocery lists on my note-taking app because it helps me remember what to buy when I go shopping.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing due to grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Focus on making your sentences clear and coherent by using correct grammar and linking words. Provide specific examples to support your ideas.

Example: Maybe in the future, the things I write will change. For instance, I might start writing lists of what my children need to eat as they grow older.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by adding more specific reasons and linking words to make it more natural and detailed.

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's more convenient and faster, especially when I need to edit or share my notes.

× I have my cell phone nowadays I it has new app called Notetaking.

✓ I have my cell phone nowadays; it has a new app called Notetaking.

The sentence incorrectly uses the pronoun 'I' before 'it', which is unnecessary and confusing. The correct pronoun to refer to the cell phone is 'it'. Also, a semicolon or period is needed to separate the two independent clauses for clarity.

× I it has new app called Notetaking.

✓ it has a new app called Notetaking.

The noun 'app' is countable and singular, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Omitting the article is incorrect in this context.

× I just open my app and write whatever I want to write it.

✓ I just open my app and write whatever I want to write.

The sentence ends with an unnecessary pronoun 'it' which creates redundancy and incorrect sentence structure. Removing 'it' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I do not have too much to write but whenever I have two good go for grocery before I went to the grocery, I make a list on my note taking app.

✓ I do not have too much to write but whenever I have to go for groceries before I go to the grocery store, I make a list on my note-taking app.

The phrase 'two good go for grocery' is incorrect; it should be 'to go for groceries'. 'Groceries' is plural and requires the plural form. Also, 'went' should be 'go' to maintain present tense consistency. 'Note taking' should be hyphenated as 'note-taking' when used as a compound adjective.

× before I went to the grocery, I make a list on my note taking app.

✓ before I go to the grocery store, I make a list on my note-taking app.

The verb 'went' is past tense, but the sentence context requires present tense to match 'I make'. Consistent tense usage improves clarity.

× Well, maybe it will change in future.

✓ Well, maybe it will change in the future.

The phrase 'in future' is missing the definite article 'the'. The correct expression is 'in the future'.

× For example, right now I we just go for grocery and have make a list just for food that we we eat.

✓ For example, right now we just go for groceries and make a list just for the food that we eat.

The sentence has redundant pronouns 'I we' and repeated 'we'. 'Go for grocery' should be 'go for groceries' (plural). 'Have make' is incorrect; it should be 'make'. Also, 'the food' requires the definite article 'the' to specify the food being referred to.

× But maybe in future we will I will write them right what my children will eat.

✓ But maybe in the future I will write exactly what my children will eat.

The sentence has mixed pronouns 'we will I will' which is confusing. It should be 'I will' to maintain subject consistency. 'Right' is incorrectly used and should be replaced with 'exactly' for clarity. Also, 'in future' needs the definite article 'the'.