Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup jelas, tetapi kalimatnya agak terputus-putus dan ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih alami dan menghindari pengulangan kata seperti 'I don't really like writing' dan 'I don't really have time to write'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih koheren dan lengkap.

Example: No, I don't write a lot because I prefer spending my time singing and hanging out with my friends. Therefore, I rarely find time to write.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa serta penggunaan kata yang kurang tepat seperti 'makes me remember IMP' yang tidak jelas maksudnya. Cobalah untuk menjelaskan dengan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan gunakan kosa kata yang sesuai.

Example: Although I don't enjoy writing much, I sometimes keep a personal journal to record my daily activities. This helps me remember important events and reflect on my experiences.

Suggestion: Anda sebaiknya mencoba untuk memahami pertanyaan dan memberikan jawaban meskipun singkat. Jika tidak mengerti, Anda bisa meminta penjelasan atau menjawab berdasarkan dugaan Anda. Ini akan menunjukkan kemampuan komunikasi yang lebih baik.

Example: I'm not sure what you mean, but I think the things I write might change as my thoughts and feelings change over time.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan ada beberapa kalimat yang tidak lengkap atau tidak jelas. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih lengkap dan gunakan kata penghubung agar jawaban lebih koheren.

Example: I prefer typing on a keyboard, whether it's on my phone or laptop, because writing by hand hurts my hand since I press too hard on the paper.

× No, I'm glad.

✓ No, I'm not glad.

The sentence 'No, I'm glad.' contradicts the context where the student expresses dislike for writing. The correct response should negate the gladness to match the intended meaning. This is a sentence structure error because the sentence does not logically fit the context.

× And go around with my friends.

✓ And I go around with my friends.

The sentence fragment 'And go around with my friends.' lacks a subject, making it incomplete. Adding the subject 'I' corrects the sentence structure by forming a complete sentence.

× That's how I spend my time with, so I don't really have time to write.

✓ That's how I spend my time, so I don't really have time to write.

The preposition 'with' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context. The phrase 'spend my time' does not require 'with' after it. Removing 'with' corrects the prepositional error.

× What do you like to write?

✓ What do you like to write?

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× Although I don't really like to write something but sometimes I write about what I do everyday.

✓ Although I don't really like to write, sometimes I write about what I do every day.

Using both 'although' and 'but' together is redundant and incorrect. The sentence should use either 'although' or 'but' to connect clauses properly. Also, 'everyday' should be two words 'every day' when referring to each day.

× It's like personal journal because it helped me to remember whatever I'm going through and makes me remember IMP.

✓ It's like a personal journal because it helps me remember whatever I'm going through and makes me remember important things.

The phrase 'personal journal' needs the indefinite article 'a'. The verb tense should be present 'helps' to match 'makes'. 'IMP' is unclear and should be replaced with 'important things' for clarity.

× I don't know the meaning of this question.

✓ I don't understand the meaning of this question.

While the original sentence is understandable, 'I don't understand the meaning of this question.' is more natural and appropriate in this context. This improves sentence structure and clarity.

× I prefer typing on keyboard whether it's on handphone, oral, laptop because every.

✓ I prefer typing on the keyboard whether it's on a phone, tablet, or laptop because...

The phrase 'on keyboard' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Handphone' is better expressed as 'phone', and 'oral' is incorrect here, likely intended as 'tablet'. The sentence is incomplete and needs continuation.

× Every time I write in paper, my hand is hurt because I do it very hard.

✓ Every time I write on paper, my hand hurts because I press very hard.

The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to writing on paper. 'My hand is hurt' is incorrect; 'my hand hurts' is the correct expression. 'I do it very hard' is unclear; 'I press very hard' clarifies the meaning.

× And I couldn't.

✓ And I couldn't continue.

The sentence fragment 'And I couldn't.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'continue' or specifying what the student couldn't do completes the sentence and improves clarity.