Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh các câu bị ngắt quãng và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh để diễn đạt ý tưởng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về việc bạn viết gì và tần suất viết.

Example: Yes, I write quite often, especially during school hours. I usually write essays and notes for the subjects I am studying.

Suggestion: Bạn cần cải thiện sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc trong câu trả lời. Tránh các câu bị ngắt quãng và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể, sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý.

Example: I like to write comics because it helps me reduce stress and allows me to express my creativity.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý phát âm và ngắt câu hợp lý để câu nói tự nhiên hơn. Bạn cũng nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ.

Example: Yes, I believe the things I write will definitely change over time. As I gain more experience and knowledge, my writing style might become more sophisticated, and I may focus more on personal experiences or current events to express my evolving perspective.

Suggestion: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và tránh các câu bị ngắt quãng. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể, sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I honestly prefer handwriting over typing because it feels more personal and convenient for me.

× I write for my. Unit that I learned.

✓ I write for my unit that I learned.

The sentence contains unnecessary periods that break the sentence structure, making it unclear. Removing the periods creates a coherent sentence. In English, sentences should not be broken arbitrarily by periods within a phrase.

× Honestly, I would like to. Dry to bow. Comics. That this is because comics writing comics allows me to. Reduce stress an. Think about. What I like? Anne.

✓ Honestly, I would like to try to draw comics. This is because writing comics allows me to reduce stress and think about what I like.

The original sentence is fragmented with incorrect word usage and punctuation, making it incomprehensible. Correcting 'Dry to bow' to 'try to draw' and combining fragments into complete sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I believe that the things like right good definitely change over time.

✓ I believe that the things I write will definitely change over time.

The phrase 'things like right good' is incorrect. It should be 'things I write' to indicate the objects of writing. Also, 'will' is needed to express future certainty. Prepositions and word choice must be accurate to convey meaning.

× As I gain more experience and knowledge for instant, my writing style might become more. Sofisticated an I could start focusing more on personal experiences or current events to express my evolving perspective this way.

✓ As I gain more experience and knowledge, for instance, my writing style might become more sophisticated and I could start focusing more on personal experiences or current events to express my evolving perspective this way.

'For instant' is a misspelling of 'for instance', which is a prepositional phrase used to give an example. Also, 'Sofisticated an' should be 'sophisticated and'. Correct preposition and conjunction usage is essential for clarity.

× I honestly, I would say that I prefer. Hen writing more than writing. Then typing when I'm writing because. This allowed me to. This is more convenient for me too.

✓ Honestly, I would say that I prefer handwriting more than typing when I'm writing because it allows me to. It is more convenient for me too.

'Hen writing' is a misspelling of 'handwriting'. The sentence structure is fragmented and pronouns like 'this' are unclear. Replacing 'this' with 'it' and correcting spelling improves clarity and grammatical correctness.