Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and spelling mistakes like 'tensed' and 'right' instead of 'tense' and 'write'. Try to use correct grammar and spelling to sound more natural. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating 'I do write a lot' and 'so I write' unnecessarily.

Example: Yes, I write quite often, especially when I feel bored or stressed, as it helps me relax.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to add more specific details to enrich your response.

Example: I like to write about my feelings and daily experiences because I keep a personal diary, which helps me reflect and relieve stress.

Suggestion: This answer is unclear due to grammatical errors and spelling mistakes like 'Dad', 'put change', 'becauses', 'tent', and 'divey'. Try to form complete sentences and clarify your ideas. Also, explain how writing changes you with specific reasons.

Example: Yes, I believe the things I write can change me because when I express my frustrations in my diary, it helps me calm down and improve my mood.

Suggestion: Good answer with clear reasons and supporting details. To improve, correct minor errors like 'becaused' to 'because' and use plural form 'feelings'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly.

Example: I prefer handwriting because it improves my handwriting skills and allows me to express my feelings better. Moreover, writing by hand helps me stay focused and be more creative than typing on a keyboard.

× Yes, I do write a lot when I'm bored or I feel tensed so I right.

✓ Yes, I do write a lot when I'm bored or I feel tense so I write.

The word 'right' is incorrect here; the correct verb form is 'write'. Also, 'tensed' is an incorrect adjective form; the correct form is 'tense'. 'Tense' is used to describe a feeling of nervousness or stress, whereas 'tensed' is not commonly used as an adjective in this context.

× I like to write about my feelings, what happened throughout the day.

✓ I like to write about my feelings and what happened throughout the day.

The sentence lacks a conjunction to properly connect the two ideas. Using 'and' improves sentence structure and clarity by linking 'my feelings' and 'what happened throughout the day' as two things the student likes to write about.

× Yes, I do think. Dad the things I write put change my behavior becauses whenever I am frustrated or tent I write my feelings on my personal divey and it helps me to become.

✓ Yes, I do think that the things I write change my behavior because whenever I am frustrated or tense I write my feelings in my personal diary and it helps me to become better.

Several errors here: 'Dad' should be 'that'; 'put change' is incorrect, should be 'change'; 'becauses' should be 'because'; 'tent' should be 'tense'; 'divey' should be 'diary'; 'helps me to become' is incomplete, adding 'better' completes the thought. These corrections fix spelling mistakes and improve sentence clarity and grammar.

× I prefer handwriting becaused it improves my handwriting skills and I can express my feeling in a better way.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it improves my handwriting skills and I can express my feelings in a better way.

The word 'becaused' is a misspelling; the correct word is 'because'. Also, 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match the context of expressing multiple emotions or thoughts.