Part 1
Examiner
Do you write a lot?
Candidate
No, not really. Nowadays I don't need to write a long essay.
Examiner
What do you like to write? Why?
Candidate
I don't like to write anything but in my life usually I would like white the essay to hand in my individual assignment.
Examiner
Do you think the things you write would change?
Candidate
Sorry I don't really understand but I think. It may be changed in the future. This is we cannot control about that.
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Candidate
In my daily life I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenience, but in the examination I prefer him write him because it can erase it or correctly more easily.
Do you write a lot?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答较简短且表达不够自然,建议增加细节说明,避免简单否定,提升表达的自然流畅度。
Example: No, I don't write a lot these days because most of my communication is through emails or messages, so I rarely need to write long essays.
What do you like to write? Why?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 语法错误较多,表达不清晰,建议使用正确的时态和词汇,明确表达喜欢写什么及原因。
Example: I usually write essays for my individual assignments because it helps me organize my thoughts and improve my writing skills.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答不连贯且语法错误明显,建议先确认问题含义,再用完整句子表达观点,避免语法错误。
Example: I'm not sure I understand the question, but I think the types of things I write might change in the future as my interests and needs evolve.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 表达中有词汇和语法错误,建议注意单词拼写和句子结构,清晰表达两种写作方式的偏好及原因。
Example: I prefer typing in daily life because it's faster and more convenient, but during exams, I prefer handwriting since it's easier to make corrections.
× I don't like to write anything but in my life usually I would like white the essay to hand in my individual assignment.
✓ I don't like to write anything but in my life usually I would like to write the essay to hand in my individual assignment.
这里的错误是动词形式错误,'white' 应该是 'write',因为句子中需要动词原形。动词拼写错误导致句意不清。建议注意动词拼写,确保使用正确的动词形式。
× It may be changed in the future.
✓ It may change in the future.
这里错误是动词时态使用不当,'may be changed' 是被动语态,但句意应为主动表达未来可能发生的变化,正确用法是 'may change'。建议理解情态动词后接动词原形的用法。
× but in the examination I prefer him write him because it can erase it or correctly more easily.
✓ but in the examination I prefer handwriting because it can be erased or corrected more easily.
这里错误是代词使用错误,'him write him' 不符合语法,应使用名词 'handwriting'。另外,'erase it or correctly' 也不正确,应该是被动语态 'be erased or corrected'。建议学习代词和名词的正确用法及被动语态结构。
× because it is faster and more convenience
✓ because it is faster and more convenient
这里错误是形容词和副词的使用错误,'convenience' 是名词,句中需要形容词 'convenient' 来修饰 'it'。建议区分名词和形容词的用法。
× Sorry I don't really understand but I think.
✓ Sorry, I don't really understand, but I think so.
这里句子结构不完整,缺少连接词和完整表达,'but I think' 后面应有补充内容或用 'so' 结束。建议注意句子完整性和连接词的使用。